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Mommy, What Happened? -just a stupid poem I wrote a week ago
Mommy, it's dark, come turn on the light.
Mom, don't you hear me?
Where have you gone, it's gotten so cold.
Come back soon please, I miss you so much.
Mother, what happened?
When did I do wrong?
What was it that happened to make you so sad?
What did I do to make you cry all the time?
Tell me, mommy, I'll fix it, I promise I will.
I'll make it all better, I won't do it again.
I'll just sit in my room like you keep telling me to.
I won't make a sound and I swear I'll behave.
Mommy stop yelling, you're scaring me now.
Please don't come closer, I don't want to hurt!
Don't throw that at me, please don't let that go!
Don't hit me with that!
I know that you love me, you can stop proving it now!
I don't want you to love me if it's going to hurt!
I now watch you leave, still yelling at me.
I watch you walk away, thinking "finally, you're gone".
Mommy, what happened to us?
I do miss you so.
I want you back, the one I used to know.
I want the mom that would tell me she loved me.
I want the mother that cared about me...
The one that never had to prove it,
with the palm of her hand.


Mitsukai Kinshou
Community Member
  • 09/21/08 to 09/14/08 (2)
  • 07/20/08 to 07/13/08 (2)




  • User Comments: [2]
    LexyCobriana
    Community Member





    Fri Jul 25, 2008 @ 08:59pm


    very depressing, but i like it. =) it's pretty, in a sick twisted sort of way. but anway its good, same with the second one...


    xobennixo
    Community Member





    Fri Sep 19, 2008 @ 12:02am


    wow i luv this poem. it sorta reminds me of my mom , just a bit. ur a GREAT writer/poet!!


    User Comments: [2]
     
     
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