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Story begining???
Creaking, cracking, bending, the stairs started to give way under my feet as I creeped up the stairs, my flashlights beam illuminating less and less the further I went. Breathing hard, I froze as soon as my only form of comfort flickered out. Great, I thought shaking my flashlight a few times trying to get the beam to come back to life.


Alright, this is all I have so far comment or pm me if you think I should continue it please!! Thanks. n_n






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Shadow`Wolf
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 11:10pm
I like it puppy but i am a biy biased towards anything you do heart


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 01, 2008 @ 01:58am
It's got a good start, maybe you could turn it into an actual story! I can see it now, 'Wolffy, the piano-playing, photographer, atrist, and author!!' Haha, it works. n__n



Xx-Killing-Passion-xX
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