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~*Quick sketch.

I was thinking. . . maybe i have my first romance story all written in my head. I don't have the names but it's about a girl. Shes the main charactor of the story. Well, her dads an achoholic and her mom is being abused and can't seem to set herself free because her father is a cop.
He drinks heavy once he's at home, laughing, then ending in fights. The girl her hobbie is hiking. She hopes to climb the tallest rock, moutain, to touch heaven and live happily.
Then she meets a boy. He's sweet, but troublesome also. They're both in highschool by the way. She is drawned to the boy right away. All the girls like him, but he's in love with her. She's the girl who wants to escape, and hes the one to throw rocks on her window and tells her to come down with him.
He breaks the law. He's a troublesome boy i tell ya! His parents not giving a crap what he did, and she seems to get mixed in it. But know matter what he does, she loves him. Deeply.
Yes they do have sex.
-something bad happens form that-
Then we have a very tragic part. Her parents finally get a divorce, but when she comes home she finds out her mom leaves her with her father. Her father bangs on the door screaming at her. She runs away. But when she can't find he boy, she goes to the parents and see them just sitting there.
'He's dead.' they would say.
What. . ? W-Why?! How!?
Car crash. He was drunk. And got hit pretty bad. course if u think thats so sudden i'll explain they didn't see each other for a couple of days.
So she decideds to run.
She packs up her hiking gear and drives away. To the biggest rock ever.
Of course. I already have my ending planned out:

My life was crashing. First my mom leaves me with my drunk father and now. . . now he's dead. That idiot was drunk like me father and died. "You idiot!" I screamed. I grabbed a rock that stucked out, and dragged my leg up and put it between a crack. I was not ready for this. Why did i climb this? What the hell, i have nothing to live for anyways. My life sucks. "I loved you! Was that not enough!?" I choked, crying harder. I propelled myself highed and almost slipped. I couldn't see anything underneath me. The floor was dark, it was a giant hole. "I had sex with you, I went everywhere with you. . why did you do this to me! Huh?! I'm-" I struggled to find the words, " sick. I love you. I love you so much. . ." The salty tears streaming down my face. My heart thumping. His love was the only thing keeping me going in life.
I reached for the farthest rock, i was so close to the top, suddenly the rock fell. Once i grasped it, it just suddenly fell from my grasp. My arm swung around me, my legs lost balance and slipped out of the cracks. I fell, kept calm knowing the rope would hold me. Snap. Feeling the hot humid air surround me, my eyes looking straight at the sky. I closed my eyes, and breathed cool air. I was flying. Everything was dark, and sounds. . . gone. Before hitting the surface. I flew to heaven.

Maybe if i just actually started 'typing' the story, you'd actually cry, hrms?
Should i write the story. . ? comment me if i should!
but if i were to write, of course i would change that crap! Why would i spoil it for u?
That ending is kinda corny, but still depressing .. right?!