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Great-Lawliet-san
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"Can't stand you!" Chapter 1
Hey, my name is Kevin Hitachi (16) I live in Japan with my dad, my mother's an american, my parents divorced when i was 6, haven't seen my mother since then. I'm always keeping to myself so i barely have any friends. emo ........................................GAH! i'm so lonely! crying Anyway I gotta crush on this cute girl in my class, her name is Akina, but she doesn't even notice me, but i'll try to win her someday! scream biggrin ETEMINATION: " blaugh HEEEEEY~! Wazup Kevy-kun!"
{ugh, that's Makoto-san(19), he's a seinor at my high school, he's so annoying! my dad says i should be his friend but i can't stand him!}

"what do YOU want Makoto"
"well i just wanted to say hi buddy" *puts arm around kevin*
* tiny blush* "I'm not your buddy."
"that's not what you said last night" *puts hand on kevin's a**
" eek wah- what the hell, all we did was study, what are you talking about, i wouldn't of even came over if my dad didn't force me! mad "
"Haha, just joking rofl "
{ugh, really Makoto is so anoying! i can't stand him!}
"whatever..... talk2hand hmph "
{Makoto is kinda cool though rolleyes }

"um, hi Makoto-kun"

" razz OH! HI Akina-san,you know me right"

"oh, yea um.... Kevin from my class."

"yups mrgreen "

*glares at kevin* "hmph, hey Akina-san watz up?"

" redface oh, well i...i was wondering if i could me your partner for the seinor tournaments."

"i'm sorry i already chose kevin for that."

"oh, well ok, um see ya later then, Makoto-kun."

"BYE AKINA! mrgreen "

"why do you get so worked up over that girl?"

"because she's beautiful and kind and..HEY! since when was i your partner for that stupid competition!"

"i just decided it, i thought it would be fun if YOU were my partner Kevy-kun."

"well i won't and stop calling me kevy-kun."

"pleeaase, i'll do anything you want kevy-kun, ANYTHING twisted "

" eek huh? what do you mean by...gah! no i won't!"

[ding, ding, ding]

"lunch is over go to class, and.... if you be less annoying maybe i'll consider being your partner stare "

"Yay blaugh " *rubs kevin's cheek* "thank you" *gives a sincere look*

" eek um, sure ima be late, see ya after class. redface "
____LATER THAT NIGHT____


"Mokoto-kun redface "
*mokoto licks kevin's ear, then pinches his nipples*
"ah,mokoto-kun "
*he then kisses kevin down until he reaches....*
"makoto-kun th-that's~ah!"
"mokoto-kun? redface "
"yes kevin?"
" scream WAKE UP YOU STUPID b*****d!"

"AAH! huh wha?"

"Mokoto! why didn't you wake me up. I'm late for school now and so are you!" [note: that's Mokoto's little brother, Kado(14).]

"ugh, Kado.... huh? LATE?! uh, okay i'll give you a ride, dammit, sooo late!"

"you baka Makoto.... stare "

[END of Ch.1]





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monochrome max
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comment Commented on: Sun Aug 24, 2008 @ 09:48pm
this is so good! i like it!!! blaugh

twisted makoto's fantasty is a big turn on twisted i love it! its charming and funny! way to go! blaugh


comment Commented on: Mon Aug 25, 2008 @ 12:55am
smile Hi everybody, here are the characters.

Kado
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Akina
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heart Makoto heart
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heart Kevin heart
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Great-Lawliet-san
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monochrome max
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comment Commented on: Mon Aug 25, 2008 @ 06:03am
OMG!!!! KEVIN IS SO SXC!!!!! *drools* heart heart heart heart blaugh


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