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...A Longing...
I long to be the sparkle in your eyes,
Those eyes that don't see me at all.
I long to be the stars in your skies,
But you won't let me see your day fall.
I long to be the glove on your hand,
That hand that will never touch mine.
I long to be the rose on your lips,
Those lips that will never tremble against my own.
This longing...,
I long to be your protector,
I long to be your lover.
I long to be the one who makes you happy.
I long to make you cry.
And yet be the one who tells you "I'm sorry".
But you will never feed this longing.
This starvation.
Because "he" is your sparkle,
Your star,
That glove,
That rose,
Your protector,
Your undeserving lover.
And I,...
am your sick heartless nobody,
that will never recover.





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    pinky_panther24
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    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 12:21am
    i like it! ^^ its so peaceful and honest plus sencire...


    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 12:47am
    o...m.....g..... did you write it? whee
    I cant believe Racoon wont like you..... i remember the other time.... she said, "ok, i admit it, your hot." i will still remember that moment 3nodding



    MoonXKandy
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    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 12:50am
    dude this poem was awsome i would love to be that girl!!!!! she is soooo lucky to have you or soon to have you [ i hope] !!!!! great job!!! i LOVED it!! 3nodding


    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 12:50am
    Aww thats so cute ^^



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    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 01:13am
    It's really good~ I dont know how to describe it, but i like it~ ^^


    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 02:03am
    awww it is so cute i love it



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    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 02:20am
    i really like this poem if i was her i would love u


    commentCommented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 06:15am
    that is really good! good job for u!! ^^ heart



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    commentCommented on: Mon Oct 13, 2008 @ 12:36am
    that is so lovely i accally turn tat poem into a song, it's very beautiful. ^^ 3nodding


    commentCommented on: Mon Oct 13, 2008 @ 01:22am
    THAT iiS S0 SW33T!!
    AWW ii WiiSH ii HAD A NiiC3
    BF LiiK3 Y0U X]



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    commentCommented on: Mon Oct 13, 2008 @ 01:33am
    Nice poem i think you could really go places and thats coming from a professional


    commentCommented on: Mon Oct 13, 2008 @ 02:26am
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart



    Lil Sis 4eva
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    commentCommented on: Mon Oct 13, 2008 @ 01:44pm
    I like it it is a srry story it is heart warming!!!!! dramallama 4laugh redface heart


    commentCommented on: Thu Oct 16, 2008 @ 04:19pm
    o....m.....g......
    that was really great!!!!!
    I love it!!!!!
    Its really Good!!!!!!! smile



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    commentCommented on: Sat Oct 18, 2008 @ 03:19am
    That is a really.
    Really.
    Really.
    obviously heartfelt song.


    commentCommented on: Sun Nov 02, 2008 @ 02:54am
    omg i think that is the sweetest thing ive ever heard u say.



    a-little-lost-in-love
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    commentCommented on: Sun Nov 02, 2008 @ 10:58pm
    awwww. so cute... i know who u r but u dont know me... im a sis of ur friends so yeah ily


    commentCommented on: Tue Nov 04, 2008 @ 12:08am
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! So cute! Why can't i be Roken_racoon?! crying



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    commentCommented on: Thu Nov 06, 2008 @ 01:51pm
    omfg that was incredible keep wrtiting^^ blaugh 3nodding


    commentCommented on: Fri Nov 14, 2008 @ 05:23am
    omg! that is SO HOT! it such a turn on! rofl



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    commentCommented on: Fri Jan 09, 2009 @ 01:15am
    Wow dude thats pretty cool


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