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Catnip-Vampire
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Tue Dec 02, 2008 @ 04:01am

Okay a couple things I feel I need to point out.

1. epilogue comes AFTER the ending, a PROLOGUE comes before

2. you did spell eighth right...

3. Kun is supposed to be used as an affectionate term for BOYS

4. I would read the rest, but Oka-san's making me get off the effing computer.... stressed

BoomBot Ninja
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Wed Dec 17, 2008 @ 01:20am

Gee wiz Kiki! lol
Everybody's a critic... rolleyes
I found only one thing to be a problem.
My recent name change.
Other than that, I have one thing to say::
AAAWWWW~~~ whee
*glomps*

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