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Her Maserati
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The STORY!
The moon set over their heads as she was held close to him, under the moon's beams tears shed from her eyes in misery. Tears came down his woolen clothes as his arms embraced her. She felt warm there; she was wanted, so she was happy.

She had never felt the feelings she felt towards him before and this was something new for her. She felt each movement of his body as she held close to him wanting it never to end.

He looked to her eyes, smiling down to each of them, he could sense her misery she felt and wanted to drive it away. He leaned in and kissed her softly upon the lips looking down to this woman.

They have known each other for years, and this was something different. Something that had them feel closer together then they ever were, and they liked it more and more each day.

They felt a dire need to be with each other at times, a time of relief between them. And one day they shall see why.

She cared about him deeply, his kind heart and his sweet personality is what she cared about. His pure light blue eyes that watched her every movement and the stance he wore was what attracted her to him. He had a way about him that never wanted to get her away from his side. A way of virtue and pride which as he laughed it weakened and he opened up to her.

On that afternoon they both sat on the curb of the street, she was holding him tight because of the coldness of the air about her. She felt his heart beat as he talked about his work he had for the next day.

"I have told you, one day near, we shall live on this street," He pointed to a small ranch like house that didn't belong but was theirs, "And we shall have parties, you shall invite multitude of people, and be envied by all. And all I have to do is give you my word and my love." He kissed her forehead then looked back to the house.

She held him tighter, the thought of it intrigued her, she wanted to be with him for as long as she could, a life together, she could see that. They both had a strong love, one of dire need of making stronger and what better way not to then to plan it.

"Then we shall get a dog," He put his hand in her hair, playing with it then feeling it as if he loved it, "It shall be a Corgi or a Doberman, and we shall walk long nights with it." He pulled her face to his and kissed her lips gently.


The sun began to set above them, her eyes teared in the cleanness of the moon rising. He held her tight knowing the day would soon come when he had to leave her and everything else they cherished.

It was hard for them to say, they always wanted to live with each other never leave each other's side. But it was a downfall, a tragic remedy they couldn't find.

He held her dearly, the way he did when they met, her tears cooling his shirt as his hand rested upon her head, stroking the hair lovingly. He could see she was upset, he could sense it but he couldn't do anything about it, "Darling-"

She raised her finger up to his lips to stop him, "Let's just sit and talk about the days that are near." She knew he would bring up that ******** war, she didn't want to hear it.


He stroked her hair once again, "The building plans can be drawn in a couple of days, and then we can live in that house like we wanted." He kissed her hand, softly, not letting it go.

Her head looked up, her eyes meeting the clear blue ones of his, "And then we can be happy once again." She removed her hand from his and kissed him passionately on the lips not ever wanting to let go.

She took his hand and pulled him towards the small house, lovingly she stroked his hand as she ran.

He had a thought in his head, something that he had to tell her. It would not make anything better but without telling it might make it worse. He had to leave tomorrow, tonight was their last night together, why couldn't he tell her?

She looked to his eyes as she closed the door behind her, his eyes made her curious, she kissed him once then put her arms about him, "What's wrong?"


OOS: I was rushed typing somewhat, so sorry if it's a little cramped with detail. I need to go through it once again.
Well in my life I am okay, since I have finally learned I am passing all my classes, I get to go to the Bahamas for Christmas!! rofl , that's exactly how I feel and also I am quite happy!!
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Please post here to tell me if you like it or not, or pm me!!





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[.Marbles.]
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comment Commented on: Sat Oct 22, 2005 @ 12:00am
good writing and I like the plot but it didn't go far enough for me.


comment Commented on: Sat Oct 22, 2005 @ 02:03am
woah.....................
awesome............
keep it up.......
so good! mrgreen



jamesecret1
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Her Maserati
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comment Commented on: Sun Oct 23, 2005 @ 10:09pm
Thanks!


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