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ok so I've been writting my story for 3 years going on 4 in march. I've made alot of changes to it and I'm going to bring the first chapter to school sometime and get some one to review it and edit it, if possible. the spelling is horable on it cus it's not typed but I don't care. I love it. as I've said before, there are four main characters, the bad guy, and 3 side characters. the names are as follows (this includes what they mean as well):
Usukie_Ichihara: Main character
Age: no one knows, she lost tract after 200 years of birth
Race: Bat demon
Technique: Dark arts, ability to control shadows
Job:Being a demon lord to thoughs of shadow decent or power, running the demon bar
Interests: Gold, anime, manga, RP, guys, and Demons
Home: (past) overture, a cavern town that only flying creatures can reach.
(Present) Demon Bar in Gaia, bed is on top beam.
Pet: P-Chan
She grew up in overture. Her parents were killed by paladins. She swore revenge on all paladins. She was raised by her aunt. She has a lot of interest in human things. The first human thing she ever saw was gold (Hence the reason she all ways says "Shiny" wink . She runs, flies, away to Gaia to make her fortune. She makes a run down bar into her home and later opens it back up after. Later on in her life at age 4500+, or so, she is named demon lord of shaddows.
The fist person she ever met was a ninja. This ninja was sitting in a tree on her way to Gaia. His name is Kiyoshi_Toshihero and he is part of the Dark Cloud Ninja Clan. He showed her the way to Gaia. After she gets to Gaia she runs into many Nekos. The neko she made friends with is named Iris_neko of doom. She thought the name was suiting. The next person she met was Tsuki_Keraimoto. Tsuki is a simple human whom she is fascinated in. She decided to teach Tsuki some of her magic but failed miserably. Tsuki then introduced her to Iracundia. She at first despised Irac because he was a paladin (Later he becomes a blackguard) whom she is sworn to fight. Later on he helps her in the bar and she grows attached to him and stops her search for killing paladins. Kechara kittie was her very first worker and customer. She meets many more people but those are the important ones.
The Bar that she manages is also her home. She has 5 employees. Tsuki, Irac, and Kittie are the ones that show up most of the time. She doesn't have that much gold so she doesn't pay them all that much. The Bar itself is a dark damp place with plenty of room for those with wings, including her. P-Chan is a pet of hers and he watches the place while she's gone.
she also has a dark past that no one knows about, not even her. it involes a lab and 3 other people. maybe (hint, hint) she find out. also her powers have almost everything to do with it.
Hon'ne_Ichikokoro:Main character
Age: 25 thousand plus
Race: Wizeran (cobination of one who is wise and a wixard)
Techniques: Basicaly mind control and enslavement, call tell the future and can blow up someones mind with a snap of a finger. remembers all, like an elephant.
Job: Phsycic, mind reader, fortune teller
Interests: Cards, any interestingly shaped objects, and books.
Home: (past) unkown
(present) a fortune telling shop, traveler
Pet: Little white dragon that speaks only to him but can kill anything he wants at will. name dorian.
Most of hon'ne's past is shrowded in mistery. When he was born he was born blind but meraculusly had the power to see. Some years later (like 10 thousand) he was found by monks and was taught how to control his mind by clearing it. They told him that his sight was his "minds eye" After learning everything he could he left and went to seek other guidences. He then ran into some lab officers (this was at the age of 21,000) who took him away and made him part of something called the "one project" he was given many powers of the mind. With his power he fourced his way out of the lab with the other 3 in the project. He personaly carried he toddler in the group back to the village in which she was born. Some months later, however, he found that it was destryed. Afterwards he found a baby dragon that told him what had happend to the girl. He took this dragon as a pet in order to find her.(He's got a nasty attitude). so he set off to find the other 3 again in hopes that they had learned of there past. Hon'ne knows who is nice and who is not. Whoever he find's first he will warn them of who is an ally. The only thing he doesn't know is why they were all in the "one project"
Mina_Ichihito:Main character
Age: don't know (she won't say)
Race: Elementalist
Techniques: to control any thing that gives off light. can burn someone to a crisp and..she likes swords so she's a master swordsman
Job: wander, vagabond. she doesn't care
Interests: swords and shining objects
Home: (past) elion (home of the elemenalists
(present) traveler, no home, doesn't care
Pet: an anoying cat, that she can't stand either, but it follows her around anyway
Mina is a solitary girl that keeps to herself. Her last name means one soul. She was born in the Elemental town of Elion and lived with her huge (like 12 person) family. She was just starting to learn her elements when some reaserchers snatched her away and put her in the "One" project. she instantly fell in love with one of the members. Taisei, who was in love with Usukie. She didn't want anyone else near him. When the group escaped the labratory, they were all seperated. She was devistaded. She then became a wonderer and went from town to town. She found one place in particular that she liked the best. Gaia. She met up with a sword shop owner and fell in love with the beautiful sharp objects. He taught her how to weild them and now she's an expert. She went wondering again. only to keep coming back to gaia. she was drawn to it. but before she came back for the last time she ran into a very sick cat. she nursed it back to health and now it wont leave her alone.
Teisei_Ichikarada:Main character
age: 32 or so
race: half human half orc
techniques: mostly his fists but he also uses a staff made bamboo
job: welder
interests: makeing new things and trying to get stronger
home: maraca an orc village that out cast him
pet: a pet rock named Darky
Kiru_Sonochi:Villan
age: new born
race: Unknown (lab experiment)
techniques: the ability to learn everything that is shown to her once
job: to distroy the earth
interests: killing the earth and gaining more power
home: unknown
pet: her pet is a little pocket sized snake that enjoys killing
Kiru was created, in a lab, to distroy all things created. She's not born until the four main characters come together and an event happens. Her body looks about 23 years old. it takes her a while to get out of usukie's body in which she got stuck in. She finds a way to take over occationally and reak havic on the earth. Once out she kills the main characters in four epic battles. there friends are next and after that she disroys the earth and is left to wonder the univerce with nothing to do.
Spire:Side character
Koneko moon:Side character
Silver moon:Side Character
so far thats all I have on profiles they take me forever.
 Usukie_Ichihara · Wed Dec 07, 2005 @ 02:01am · 0 Comments |
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