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hummm....i wonder..?


x- sin amor -x
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is it worth finishing???
i was siting in the back of class. [beyond boredom] when i started writing a story and i want to know if its worth finshing.. 3nodding

Jackie glanced down at the speedometer of his sleek black viper motercycle.
"40..50.."
He reved the engin and pressed his foot further down on the gas.
"60..70.."
He looked over the rim of his romani shades and smiled into the side mirror.
"this place is a desert jack."
"yeah i know.."
He shifted his gaze to his left. Mrikuya Niji looked over and griined as he ran along side the bike, keeping up smoothly. Jackie pressed his foot further on the gas.
"110...120..."
He looked to his left but niji was gone.
"whats wrong kuya? to fast?"
He waited then laughed when he heard no response. He pushed his glasses up and watched the side walk hungrily.
"man this piece of metal is crap!"
The bike swerved to the side.Jackie growled in annoyance. He searched the streets for any signs of life. Niji ignored him as he dug his nails in the violet leather seating and jumped onto the back of the bike. He smiled as he slowly stood in a low crouching position.
"how fast are we going?"
He peeked over Jackies shoulder at the speedometer and laughed.
"145! Man im suprised we haven't crashed yet because i remember last time when.."
Jackie face twisted into an anamalistic snarl as a low angry growl built in his throat. Niji's eyes shifted to a near by cross walk. He inhaled the air deeply and without a second thought he jumped off the bike and ran. His eyes locked on a tall fit looking women as he growled exsposing large blood stained razor sharp fangs. The women turned and sucked in a huge breathe to scream when he locked his hand around her throat and slammed her into the concret.


[[well??? confused ]]




 
 
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