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For Me: Chrysalis
8/28/14

Quote:
By Kenneth

Chrysalis

A spark
Vulnerable and small
Born from the dark
Becomes
a golden ball
paints her canvas
Green and tall
With blue
And hue
And morning dew


This poem was written for me (per my request razz ) for my birthday as a present. 10/12/14 My comments: The only critique I have is that I was born at 10:15pm at night. Morning dew I would change to something more relative to the night hours. But I love this poem smile
12/7/14 My comments: Makes me think of a peach!

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