This morning I was kinda bored and so I went on Word and I just started typing up this story. It's gonna be great I can tell! I'm done with the first chapter already. If you are a fan of fantasy I highly recomend you read it. I still need to come up with names. Well nonetheless, here it is! To whoever reads this and liked it: Please tell me what you think!
Chapter One
He awoke to the sound of soft humming. He opened his eyes and saw a bright light. He had to shield his eyes from the intensity of it. Once his eyes got used to the light he looked around at his surroundings.
He could tell that he was in another place; different from the one he had been in. Birds were chirping and he could hear wings fluttering in the distance. The humming had stopped and was talking to him now.
"Oh you've awoken!" It was the voice of a girl. "I've been worried about you! You've been asleep for a while now."
He rolled over in what seemed to be a bed made of hay and down feathers, he could now tell that he was inside some building made of stone with a little window shedding light on where he lay. He looked at the girl, actually, she was hardly his age. She had long light blonde hair that came down to her waist. Part of it was pulled back in a braid. She had what seemed to be a high forehead and slender brows that accented her brown eyes. But what really stood out was her ears! They where long and pointed as if they where an elf's ears.
"I must be dreaming." He muttered while rubbing his head. He spoke to the girl that was standing beside him. "Excuse me, miss. Where am I and how did I get here? He thought that his question sounded stupid. He should have remembered something as to how he got there but for some reason he couldn't remember a thing. The girl replied,
"Why you are in [name of place] and I am a(n) [name of race] my name is [name]. I found you lying in the woods unconscious. You've been asleep for at least a night. You were wearing the strangest clothes and they where worn and tattered and bloody, as if you had been in a fight." The boy sat up at this news but found that it hurt him to make sudden movements.
"Oh be careful!" The girl made him lie down again. "You don't want those wounds to open up again do you?" She flashed an uneasy smile.
"But I can't just lie in bed! I have to find out how to get back!" To get back to where? He thought. I don't even know how I got here! He buried his face in his hands knowing that it was useless to object. She looked like the kind of person that doesn't take 'no' for an answer. Just then they heard a sharp knock on the door.
 Cherez_D3h4d3II · Sat Feb 05, 2005 @ 06:28pm · 1 Comments |
