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DBZ: The Hunt pt.2
lright Here's what you all have been waiting for part 2 of this story! The story was left off when the hunting was about to start and Suave tells Bardock:

"Remember, don't hold back at all. I want you to treat me the way you would treat a Saiyan woman ypi are choosing to bond with. No matter how brutal it becomes, don't hold back anything!!" "Okay I won't and you can not take a healing bath or eat those senzu beans because a saiyan woman did not have anything to ease her pain, except time." Says Bardock with his hand on her shoulder.
"That's cool, I hope you are prepare for the pain, I'm going to give to you!!" she said, going to the door. "Hey Suave, keep in mind that I have always known you were in heat!! We will conceive again today so call and cancel your appointment because you will be pregnant before the day is over GUARANTEED!!!!!" He yelled and then laughed.
Suave screamed with anger and flew away. Bardock had a stopwatch he wanted to make sure he did not wait 15 min and one second over or 14 min and 59 seconds to soon. He wanted the time to be accurate and the hunt to be perfect. Soon the time was up Bardock stepped outside, closed his eyes and took a deep breath of her scent. "Hmmmmmmmm, she ran this way." He said and took off running. "The smell is so strong over here. Okay Bardock calm your body down, you must concentrate very hard on your target. You spend the entire night sniffing here for theis moment." He said to himself. He begin running faster following her scent. "She hid her tracks well. I don't even see her size 6 shoe prints." He said looking in the dirt. Twenty minutes passed and there was no sign of her then he looked closer, he saw foot print but it was cheetah prints. "Oh so she's playing rough. Disguised as a real cheetah, good one suave." He said then walked slower, sniffing here scent more in-depth. He looked side-to-side, front to back. He covered all four corners, but he forgot to cover the fifth one about him because from nowhere a Cheetah jumped on his back. He fell to the ground quickly and threw her off him, she was growling and roaring. Her backed arched in attack mode. "You know, you're no match as a Cheetah, I don't care what form you are in, I'm mating with you today and you know as a Cheetah, it will be very painful!!!" He yelled then ran up to her feet. She turned around and ran fast as she could, he ran faster and grabbed her tail. She quickly turned around and bit his hand.
"Damn Suave!!!" He yelled, and let go of her tail, holding his bleeding hand. She then disappeared. "Okay fighting very dirty. My turn kitty!!!" He said, then followed his nose. He had anger in him now, he flew into the sky making his power level very low, so she would not be able to detected him. He continued the sniffing and there she was well hidden behind a rock. He smiled, did the spontaneous movement, reappearing on her back as if he had jumped on a horses back. "I Gotcha!!!" He laughed. She began running wild, like a furious bull seeing red. Bardock held on to her neck and body tightly with his arms and legs. He became too heavy so she began to Transform back into her half-and-half mode. (What half-and-half mode is when her fur covers certain parts of her body and when she snaps her fingers and saying a phrase in her mind, clothes appear on her body, then she goes turns back to a human.) She kicked him off and before she could snap her fingers he was back on her.

Suave began punching him in the face with a lot of strength, busting his lips and nose. She punched one last time, he grabbed her fist, squeezing it tightly, causing her to yell out loud. With her free hand she build up a fireball and threw it directly in his face, knocking him up against a tree. He quickly ran up to her, jumped in the air and came down on her with all of his weight, pinning her to the ground. She began yelling with anger. Her tail came from between her legs and started slapping the side of his face, he tried to ignore it. She put the tip of her tail in his ear, he let go of her right arm to scratch his ear and that gave her the time she needed to knee him square in the face. He fell off her yelling and she gave him a string attack punching him repeatedly in the face. Bardock balled up his fist and for the fist time he hit her in the face, knocking her up against that same tree, knocking the breath out of her. Bardock stood up and had death in his eyes as blood poured from his mouth and nose. Suave stood up too, bleeding the same. Then they ran at each other fast and began punching. They flew into the sky punching and punching. Suave fell from the sky and into the ground, creating a canyon, then stood up and he charged at her hard, knocking her further into the canyon, making it bigger. She kicked him off her and tried to fly away but he grabbed her by the neck and body slammed her to the ground with one hand, knocking her senseless. He power drove her hard and quick while still holding her neck tight. She she came to her senses and he was winning the fight. He was kissing her strong and hard as he was choking her to death. She screamed with lost breath. He kissed her so deeply that he didn't noticed her changing forms. He was still holding her neck tightly, kissing her more vigorously. Suave became her Royal Cheetah Form, her hair was white, so was her tail, her eyes were Ice Blue, her fangs grew longer and so were her nails. She quickly grabbed him by the neck, threw him out of the canyon and up against a rock. She flew out of the cannon and double fist punch him in the face, pounced into the air and came down on him. she was on his back, now her prey. She turned his head to the side and bit his neck hard. He yelled out in much pain as his wife bit him. She would not stop. His eyes turned hazel. She continued biting him. His hair grew on his head. She stops bitting him and sat up. Her lips had his blood on them, running down the side of her mouth.
Suave saw him transform into his Royal Sayian Form. SO she decided to get all the beat down that she could so she punched him in the stomach, face, ribs, everywhere none stop using all of her power. Red fur grew on his chest. Suave power blast him again but with all of her power. Before the smoke cleared, her neck was grabbed again. Bardock flew as fast as he could into a mountain, taking him and her though it all the way to the other side. Both of them yelled. He body slammed her once again by the neck then grabbed both her arms and pinned them to the ground.

This is the end of part 2 I hope you enjoy this one as much as you did part one and please fill free to comment. Part 3 coming soon. xd

Kenomuru Tisoki
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  • User Comments: [2]
    Jetta Minx
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    Tue Jan 16, 2007 @ 01:20am


    Oh I just read both part one and part two. It's very different from other things that I've read. You sure do like fight scenes don't you?


    Fayt_of_Redemption
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    Fri May 11, 2007 @ 07:57am


    But of course you're the one i was referring to. whee


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