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Ginga Densetsu Kali
The chapters of my GDW fanfic will be put here.
Ginga Densetsu Kali Chapter one
A full moon washed its pale glow over the forests of Ohu. Beneath the mountain of Paradise, over 5 dozen dog bodies littered the ground. There were only 5 left standing, facing each other, fangs bared and ready to strike. On the side closest to Paradise was a smaller, male black and grey Akita Inu. Next to him was an overly large brown great dane dog. The great dane had half an ear missing and scars riddled his body. He and the Akita faced a young, two-year-old female brown Akita Inu. Her bleached-white fangs glowed in the moonlight. She was flanked by two older dogs.

The black and white Shiba inu on the females right took a step in front of her, growling at his adversary. The dane was going to be tough…all to protect her…

On the growling females left stood a brown springer spaniel, his hackles raised and ready to leap on his enemy. As much as he hated it, he would have to team up with the Shiba on this fight.

“Axel…this is your last chance. We shouldn’t fight, we’re siblings!” the brown female cried.

“Shut it, b***h!” the black Akita growled, “You have no right to be here! This is MY land!”

The Shiba growled and completely blocked Axel’s view of the female.

“Don’t you dare call Kali such a word!!! I’ll rip you to shreads!!!!” he roared.

“Kuroji!” the female hissed, “Enough!” She stepped past the confused and angry three-year-old Shiba and got her muzzle inches from her brothers. “I’ll kill you if I have to, Axel…”

Axel let out a loud bark and the dane roared. He first attacked the spaniel and successfully knocked him unconscious. He turned to face the female, but was stopped by Kuroji.

“You’ll have to kill me first before you lay a fang on her!!” he growled as he fastened his fangs in the danes neck.

With a swift neck movement, Kuroji was able to flip the dane into the snow. But the dane was a skilled fighter. He clamped his jaws around Kuroji’s neck and flipped him with a sickening crunch. It was now that the spaniel, Jaybu, had woken from his daze and leapt on the dane, trying to take out the monsters legs. In the midst of the fight, Axel leapt on the female, closing his jaws around her throat. The female struggled in her brothers grip.

“Kali…I’m gonna make you pay for what you did.” Axel growled, tightening his grip.

“It…wasn’t my decision…” Kali choked.

“Shut up!!” Axel snarled.

Kali could feel her windpipe closing. It was getting harder and harder to breathe. Her vision started to fade in and out. Help…she needed help…
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SIX MONTHS PRIOR…
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A warm summer breeze blew across a small forested clearing. In the middle of this sat a 4-year-old brown Springer Spaniel. He stood triumphantly over his kill of a rabbit. This was the biggest thing he had managed to catch in his life! Well, at least in the 2 years he had been in the wild. The male licked his jaws and lowered his head to take that first, juicy bite out of his kill. His jaws clamped on thin air. Confused, the male spaniel looked up to see a young, brown Akita pup with his kill in her jaws. The female turned and ran in the opposite direction when their eyes locked. She was fast—but not fast enough.

In a flash, the spaniel was beside her. He rammed his forehead into the female’s side, throwing her off balance and into the dirt. The impact was enough to make her drop her stolen lunch. The spaniel kept a firm paw on the Akitas’ head and body, keeping her pinned on her side. But he felt each and every rib under his black pads. Instantly, he released the young female, who staggered to her paws. She weakly bared her fangs and rushed the spaniel, aiming for his neck. Her jaws were able to get a strong grasp and she managed to flip the male over, sending him crashing into the dirt.

“This…this is mine…” she panted, padding to the dead rabbit.

Her form appeared zombie-like, and in the new sunlight, the spaniel could see multiple scars all over her body. Was the poor thing a warm-up dog for those fighting Tosa dogs?

“Ahh, whatever. I can get a new one…” the spaniel muttered, getting to his paws.

He was answered by a fwump. The spaniel turned to see the Akita female slumped on the ground, inches away from death.

“H-hey…!” the spaniel called, trotting over to her form, “Hey! Pup! Are you alright? Pup!”

No response. Her breathing was short and ragged, like her lungs barely had enough energy to keep moving. The spaniel gently bit the pup’s scruff and pulled her body out of the sun. He made sure she was alright, then retrieved his lunch and brought it to the weak pup. There, he began tearing the meat into little strips and let it rest by her muzzle, hoping the scent would be enough to wake her. The Akita females muzzle twitched not long after and her eyes opened to reveal the beautiful light blue irises. Her jaws clamped around the first strip of rabbit and ate noisily, but quickly. There was something about the pup that looked familiar…but what was it?

“You’re pretty scrawny…Where did you come from?” the spaniel asked.

No answer.

“…Well can you tell me your name?”

No answer. He wasn’t getting anywhere with this pup. She just kept gnawing away at the bones of the rabbit, eating every last scrap of edible meat. When she was done, the pup rose to her paws and dipped her head low to the spaniel.

“Thank you very much for the food.” She said in a wavery, small voice.

“Oh, so you can talk?” the spaniel scoffed.

He was answered by a puzzled look from the small female right before she was bowled over by a massive great dane. His brown pelt was coated in scars and old nasty-looking wounds—almost as if that was the fur itself. The Dane lifted the dazed pup by the back of her scruff and tossed her into a tree like she was a ragdoll. The spaniel could only watch the poor female get beaten.

“Ren! Enough!” A young voice squeaked.

The Dane, Ren, instantly backed off the female with a low grunt. He moved his massive paws aside to let room for a very small black and grey male Akita Inu pup. The pup swaggered to the small female, giving off an air of extreme superiority.

“Huh…though we chased you out last month…dirty trespasser.” The male growled.

He lifted the female by her forepaw and swung her around a few times to gain momentum, then released her, sending her flying into the bushes. The spaniel opened his jaws to protest the treatment of the female, but Ren glared down at him, forcing the spaniel to slink away.

“If you come back on MY territory again, fake, I’ll kill you next time!” the black male shouted after the female, “I am the leader! The Leader of OHU!!!”

With a maniacal laughter, the pup and Ren left back into the bushes, chuckling and mumbling with each other.

The spaniel bounded over to the female, who just lay in the dirt, breathing heavily. He knew she looked familiar.

“Are you…?” the spaniel asked cautiously.

The female shakily got to her paws.

“Yeah…I’m one of the leaders pups. Name’s Kali, and I’m the true leader of Ohu.”





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