Thanks for commenting on my story. ^^
Yeah, I agree with you about the descriptions... I just... had a moment of doubt when I typed it up (it was handwritten originally) and so I combined them. I also see what you are saying about the needed detail... normally I don't write too much on gettting ready scenes because I'm afraid to draw it out too long. Usually the more into the story I get the more the main character's personality comes out. I just didn't write enough on that one... it seemed so much longer in my notebook... lol. Thanks for the advice though. I love that sort of feedback. Not that I usually get it. stare
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I'm Angel by the way.
Yeah, I agree with you about the descriptions... I just... had a moment of doubt when I typed it up (it was handwritten originally) and so I combined them. I also see what you are saying about the needed detail... normally I don't write too much on gettting ready scenes because I'm afraid to draw it out too long. Usually the more into the story I get the more the main character's personality comes out. I just didn't write enough on that one... it seemed so much longer in my notebook... lol. Thanks for the advice though. I love that sort of feedback. Not that I usually get it. stare