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Meep. A word which here means meep. Why, were you looking for some deeper meaning there?
A Poem inspired by my boyfriend.
Two Pillars

There are two pillars standing side by side
Each ravaged by the time that they spent here.
Pretending that they are full of some pride
Lonely and hoping that they'll soon die here.

They wish to crumble—sweet oblivion—
Nowhere to go now, nothing to stand on.
At last they do fall, their cores crumble in
They fall to each other—they can go on.

Thus now they stand: Together, side by side.
Leaning and loving, and with each other.
These two pillars live, and love was their guide
And now as they lean there, fear won’t bother.

There are two pillars standing side by side.
And thus they stand: Together, side by side.


If you're wondering about the weird style, its a sonnet. A sonnet is 14 lines in length. Each line contains 10 syllables, and each verse rhymes alternately except for the last two lines, which form a couplet. And thus the weird style. But I like it, although it definately needs some work.






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f.i.r.e.f.l.y.
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commentCommented on: Sat May 26, 2007 @ 02:49am
glad to know i've finally inspired someone for the better... it's beautiful =)


commentCommented on: Sat May 26, 2007 @ 02:55am
You always inspire me for the better. I used to be very depressing. If you'l remember those e-mails I used to send, I'm surprised that you're even still here. xd
I wrote it, though, because I though it would be beautiful. I like the imagery, also, that you gave me of the two pillars. I thought it was lovely...deffinately worth immortalizing.



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