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Title: Unloved - Part one Score: 6.2659 Total Ratings: 439 Total Comments: 110 Rank: 0 Comments you received wing_goddess maybe u'd be loved more if u loved urself enough not to poison yourself day by day by smoking.
DaddyLittleGirl1985 8
Ingrid Anette nice tough
pjykhbab lol
exit758190 Oh!... quite extrordinary!!
~coco_kiki_quester~ cool
dan 234 kinda nerdy
Nerzerz What? The girls don't like him? Even with his ANIMAL magnetism? Sorry I had to say it, lol. I liked the story, and your avi fits really well with it. Great job!
IchigoKurosaki-DeathKing i don't get it
The Shop Helper Thats a pretty cool avatar
KakashiH456 very good. :]
(~Nazi-0f-Luff~) o3o reminds me of the manga loveless...
xhjsdawd uh, yeah, uh
Nathaniel_The Freak cool =)
B a b i B r e e z y umm 9/10 good job though i hope your avar winsss
go_4_it_girl he is hot!!!!!!!!!!!
AbsoluteRuler Hmm.. You should get a real flower XD
snofox507 it's not supposed to be a flower... it's supposed to be the clover, symbolizing luck. if it were a flower, it wouldn't make sense. and speaking of not making sense... whoever it was on the first page that said it didn't--you are a retard. thank you, and goodbye for now
donte1204 smoking is bad 4 u
shadow-warrior234 hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahashahah a lol
Soua14 Kinda ok but u could do better
prohibited_948694 hmm.. very impressive
jimchou0 23rd
My Mules Mule very cute fox boy
e t a - n a r u lol. I like the story but take out the smoking.
HarryPottersSecretAdmirer interesting
~Pixie Sprint~ ....
snofox507 three things... 1: if you have NOTHING to say but lol, ..., or just cool, then your comment will be deleted. 2: if you're going to complain about the smoking, then too bad. it's part of the story, and my personality, so DEAL WITH IT 3: thanks for the positive comments so far. i appreciate it. but 'constructive criticism' is appreciated as well. if you're just going to flame me, your comment will be deleted as well. Tha's all for now! See ya'll later! heart
Poupoule ^^
Soua14 i agree wit wing_goddess
Bon-turn I think you did a great job! The stre is great! I think it is simple but in a good way. There isn't too much stuff to confuse the eyes! !0/10
Derakon sure
-DJ- P H A R C Y D E Loser.
daetriusmyst I kind of like this one, he does look like a college student.
relativity605945 Omg so awesome
steam767787 pretty amazing <3
AroAge Thats a pretty cool avatar
xXXxTiFFanYxXXx hmm~expect ur story will be going...avi not bad too
Avionnah you are loved..with someone which you don't even know exists..trust me.. wink
mallary very good job^^ awesome description and cute avi^^
blue-eyedfantasy cool
yaypelicans too many furries
pink_hchan Nice.
happy___bunny_1735 sexy man
Made For Disco Thats a pretty cool avatar
TTTheEnd Omg kinda astonishing
Trolly Troll emo die!!!
wfyycktt cute
snofox507 Thanks again for the positive imput. Screw you to all the negative comments, which either have been or will be deleted. But seriously... critique me! Don't just say 'cool' or 'OMG quite astonishing'... The story will continue, but I'd like at least a little bit of input so I can tweak things around a bit. Of course, the attire will change along with the story, but still... actually SAY something useful. Thanks again! heart
Kazuma2214 nice
The Shop Helper Thats a pretty cool avatar
Beata99 i cant wait for next week. ^^
.PandyGirls.Boyfriend. You made me read all that and it still sux!!!
AHHitsAlexis ahah emo. gross.
xXLloyd hikomariXx pretty awesome.
kanflyer Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a little too much and you should definalty get yourself an OMG
Edward_Elric_06 7
Nixtie a smoking fox.
Kazuma_uzumaki not a winner
feelmyhaks Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a little too much and you should definalty get yourself an OMG
Utsuneko Princess well, i do not like the story much, but the avi is AWESOME!!!!! so 9.
5_of_Spades biggrin
Yozaku cool
angelpup_princess NO! I don't like this avi 1/10 nice try though
edgeguard Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a little too much and you should definalty get yourself an OMG
Luigi 316
nao hikari Omg this is good XD
xXLloyd hikomariXx extremely joyful :]
heartofsilver777 cute 8
XxX Angel_Passion XxX LMFAO
devilblueeyes lame and borrrrring
Dragonsinrage bump
Hossman 7
Shefura cool!
Angel Essayez nice outfit, nice story. 10/10 smile
Wienars Galore Thats a pretty cool avatar
Heidi-san 10/10 something about this one...
((Gaara))((Kun)) Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a little too much and you should definalty get yourself an OMG
Spikeband Just a heads up, this is the Avatar Arena, not the "I'm gonna give you some crappy story, with an even crappier avatar arena."
torosentado cool
Suvaka Star no smoking! then your chances of being love will go up, after all, girls like boys with cute ears! Lmao. very nicely done by the way ^^
onirule ok?
lendldumadag Too Gay....
DonoNobody yay smokey mcsmokerson!!! and your smoking smokers!!! 9/10
Artemide_Luna sweet
feelmyhaks Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a little too much and you should definalty get yourself an OMG
Jupiter Popsicles Well, it matches the story, so...... I guess that means it's pretty nice! ^_____^
Mitsukumuro ummm I think it's part of a book if you didnt read the Description...6-6
stalkingpinoy Thats a pretty cool avatar. But imo it clashes a little too much and you should definalty get yourself an OMG
wrtliqzr Kool i love it!!
The Ghostbuster 00
The Ghostbuster .->
Sakika29 Nice
Madrake Thats a pretty cool avatar
snofox507 Hey guys, it's me again. Firstly, deal with the smoking, damnit! Second, this is my own true story, not from some ******** book. Third, screw you, all you negative commentors who aren't even posting any form of constructive criticism *deletes posts*. Fourth, thank you for the positive feedback. Fifth, to you bots, go to hell--I am not getting an OMG, so STFU and GTFO, you SOB's.
BlueBowser cool
K_R-20 Dont enter an avatar if you just want to enter a story. it's an alright avatar too, you just need more items of those colours.
V0Z 10/10
Knight of Alexandria Very cute. Ignore the first comment, the cig adds to the college kid look.
xneosanderz smoking is bad for u!!! pretty good description!
Purple Carnation XD I totally would've dated the hot guy.. If he didn't smoke. And if he were real. wink
maxi 306 7/10 it to simple
darkmoon-tay 10
Dazeekruz quite beautiful wee!
KatrinaLee88 so sorry about life lol
pxqqjuwr uh, yeah, uh
frosty_rose I agree with da first commenter
Adypie nice
peaceful solitude aww
KrAzY_MoMaS_gUrL Very Nice
snofox507 · Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 06:24pm · 0 Comments |
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