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Mah Very First Poem. I just found my very first journal of poems. This is the very first one I wrote. Angels of Heaven Demons of Hell No Matter You Don't Choose Angels of Heaven Demons of Hell Remeber, It Chooses Well. Life and Death Total Opposites Live While You Can But, Death Has a Plan You Can't Escape Death Like I Always Say It Will Find You And You Will Pay Life Is Not Fair As We Probably Found Out Things Happen In Our Life Things We Can Do Nothing About Life or Death Heaven or Hell Make things Right That's All I Have To Tell. I think it's gay. Tell me your opinion.

Posted by: Mr Jesus Tree Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 04:24am

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Commented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 05:05pm


	Relle good everyone thinks their own poetry suxx i do the same thing but your write like 10x better than me so Good Job I like It! wink

Commented on: Sun Jul 01, 2007 @ 04:33am

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Commented on: Thu Mar 27, 2008 @ 08:19pm


	it's actually a very good poem. i myself can't write poetry at all which makes yours seem extra good. i'm better at simply flooding my opinion in a personalized letter onto a piece of paper and keeping it in my binder to remind me of that person i wrote it about... i almost regret switching schools now... but your poem seems really good to me. go llamas!!! dramallama

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