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Fanfic Preview
Okay yeah so I've been working on this fanfic that I started awhile back and I can't seem to get any ideas as to what I want to put for my fourth chapter sweatdrop So I decide to post the first preview of the chapter and anyone who would like to read it can click on the web page link under my avatar.

Chapter 1: The Strange Visitor


(2½ years have passed since Sasuke left the village, and a new kunoichi has move to Konoha, is she a friend or foe)


Kunoichi POV

“Humph it took me long enough to get here. I wonder if the village is better than the rest” she whispered to herself, “Oh well only one way to find out.” Rin walked through the tall doors in to Konoha where she was stopped by two masked ANBU ninjas.

“May we see some I.D?”

‘Why?”

“So we can identify if you are an enemy or an ally”

“What if I say ‘No’?” she said as a wicked smile creped on her face

“If you say no we will have to ask you to leave, or else…”

“… or else what?”

“Or else we will have to use force.”

“Humph, then I guess we’ll have to use force to get rid of me” she said with a sarcastic tone. Rin stood perfectly still while the two masked ANBU ninjas were pulling out their kunai and started to rush Rin. When all of a sudden Rin raised her right arm towards one of the ninja and clenched her hand into a fist. And before his very eyes the ninja was shredded into tiny bits. The last ANBU ninja left jumped back away from her while she walked forward towards the dead body.

Rin bent down and tasted the dead ninjas’ blood, “Mmm. . . oishii” as a blood thirsty smile appeared across her face. She stood up and faced the last ANBU ninja and said “If you want to live and not die a stupid death like you friend here, then you will take me to your hokage immediately. He glared at her for a few minutes and then agreed to take her there.

Hokage’s POV

“I CAN’T BELIEVE I STILL HAVE ALL THESE PAPERS TO DO!!” the hokage yelled at herself while looking at the stacked of papers on her desk. (KNOCK, KNOCK!) “Doozo!” there enter the ANBU ninja and strange a girl, who had deep emotionaless eyes, black shoulder length hair, black gloves, with a small dagger at her waist, and a neckband that read ‘Shine’ (for most of you who don’t know Japanese it means ‘Die’).

“What is it?” the aggravated hokage asked.

“… This girl wanted to see you ma’am, she told me that it was urgent.”

“Fine, you may go” the ninja obeyed her orders and left.

“So, who are you?”

Well that's all for now anyway, Hoped you enjoyed it. biggrin But if you're interested in helping me, please read the whole story and comment back here and what you think I should do 3nodding





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