this is a new story that i made its alright i made it up its not real over anything
Main Character
Jin
Tej
Melissa
Jenny
As lighting shader and the rain drips on my shoulder the blood that falls down to the ground being wash away by the rain as the knife slide out of her body as she falls to the ground cover in blood as the night sky turns darker lighting hits hard as she lays there and fade away. Jin stands with the bloody knife in his hand the knife that killed the one he loved a small hand knife, as he falls to his knee it was getting darker and darker his eyes gets all white as his body hits the ground. I run over, Jin.......Jin what happen what happen man say something say something........... the light flash. It all started 2 year ago hey I'm Jin Bascud I'm 18 year old I live in a big city well yeah its California what do u think well 2 year ago I live a normal life going to college nothing 2 worry about I live with my brother Tej well he's not really my brother my best friend i call him that because we have been friends when i was like 1 i think even younger he's a year older then me doesnt bother but were in the same grade well here we go. Tej: Jin wake up wake up.........., Tej walks into the other room bring back cloths and a backpack Tej: get ur fat a** out of bed, as he kicks me out of bed, Jin: do u have 2 wake me up everyday like that man just hit me on the head or something, Tej: hmmmm nah its more fun well hurry were goin 2 be late, Jin: late for what we dont have school or work today, Tej: just hurry up and wear some nice cloth, Jin: ok man ok. As we walk out of the house we were walking along the beach, Jin: yo dude wat are we doin here man, Tej: duh do 2 pick up chicks man u been working 2 hard man u need 2 get out more pick up some gurls man, Jin: nah man i dont want 2 i have 2 many things to doand i dont have time for gurls now man, Tej: dude ur so crazy......... (look over shoulder) well u can do watever u want i see someone over there so bye. As Tej run off i sit and just layed on the beach Jin: wow wat a dumb a** i just dont wanna waste my time right now with gurls, As he lay there he saw a gurl run by she was cute black curly hair and alittle dark skin he want 2 say hi but he didnt want 2 it was getting dark then Tej kick me out of the house bucuz he had someone there god i was just walking around for awhile then it started 2 rain i ran 2 the park there was a thing that can cover me from the rain when i got there i saw a gurl running here it was her kind of weird becuz i thought i would never see her again as she ran in, Gurl: hi can i stay here with u, Jin: ummm yeah its not mine so i dont mind, Gurl: wow its sure raining hard we might be here for awhile, Jin: yeah but even if it clears up i cant go home, Gurl: why not, Jin: well my brother kick me out becuz he has someone there and yeah....., Gurl: hmmmm ohhh ohhh that alittle wrong nasty really, Jin, yeah i know so im stuck here..... well luckey u came i got someone 2 hang out with. She laughs, Gurl: well im Melissa, as she shacks my hand, Jin: hi im Jin its really nice 2 meet you, As Time flys by we talk on and on until the rain clears up.
Morning hits I wake up at the park, Jin: s**t i forgot wat time it is crap, as i rush home when i get 2 the door opening it slow, Jin: yo dude are u done with watever u were doing hello, Tej: yeah yeah yeah she not here anymore so where were u the whole day, Jin i was talking 2 a gurl in he park that it then she left and i fell asleep. Tej: so did u get her number, Jin: wat for, As Tej walk out of the bathroom, Tej: you know.......... man if u dont get a gurlfriend soon im goin 2 call u gay man, Jin: WHAT!!! why the hell would u call me that, Tej: u never had a gurlfriend in so long u know that, Jin: so wats ur point, Tej: ok ok let me make this simple u need 2 get laid u got that laid, Jin: watever man ill find one when im ready, Tej: when is that, when ur 30 and sitting on ur a** doin nothing, Jin: watever man im goin 2 go out, Tej: well while ur at it pick up a chick. As i walk out on the apartment i walk off 2 find a place 2 eat as i sit down and order i heard someone calling me, Melissa: Jin wow its nice seeing u here i didnt know u eat here, Jin: ohh yeah i eat here alot Billy over there took care of me when i was a kid, Melissa: ohh really umm can i sit here, Jin: ohhh yeah. As Billy comes over, Billy: well now Jin wat may i get for u and ur gurlfriend, Jin: Billy she not my gurlfriend, As she luaghs alittle, Billy: watever u say Jin ill go get u something nice, As he walks away into the backroom. Melissa: you know so cool people, Jin: yeah sorry about that, Melissa: its ok i doesnt bother me, Jin: so wat are u doin here, Melissa: ohhh i eat here every morning scince i moved here, Jin: so how long have u live down here, Melissa: ohhh i lived here for like 4 year already. Billy comes out of the back, Billy: well here u go enjoy, Melissa: wow i didnt even order, Billy: anything for Jin new girlfriend, Jin: I told u old man she not my gurlfriend, Melissa: its ok Jin calm down, Billy: yeah Jin listen 2 ur gurlfriend well the foods on me, as he walks away. Jin: god why is this happening 2 me, Melissa: wat is, Jin: ohhh there messing with me becuz i never had a gurlfriend in a long time and now they think ur my gurlfriend, Melissa: its ok i don mind but y are they messing with u becuz you dont have one, Jin: well its becuz i got out of a bad one a long time ago and i just dont want 2 waste my time anymore, Melissa: well thats really bad but i hope u do it not really good just being single all the time u know well its been a great time we should do it again sometime, Jin: ummm can i have ur number so i can call u sometime you know so we can have luch or dinner together again, Melissa: ohh ok as she writes it down on my hand and leaves i left later after that 2 i went home Tej wasnt there thank god as i wrote down the number in the book near my desk and put it into ,y cell i went 2 take a bath as i came out Tej was home Jin: so were where u at, Tej: out that all (looks at my hand) well i see u got her number yeah see u can pick up a gurl...... but still not better than me, Jin: she just a friend she gave me her number she we can hang out sometimes, Tej: so u asked her out on a date, Jin: no 2 hang out as friends, Tej: man why did u do that, Jin: well its maybe becuz i dont know her that much and im just not goin 2 sleep with her i wanna be her friend dumbass, Tej: wow u like her dont you, you really like her, Jin: wat..... no i just meet her, Tej: then why the hell do u care about her so much u wanna know her more come one man u really like her, Jin: ........... so wat if i do i not goin 2 ask her out we just meet man, Tej: well yeah true but u just dont have power like me 2 get her in bed, Jin: watever man. We turn on the TV and watch movie until it was getting really really dark
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