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HI TELL ME WAT YOU THINK PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
I am alive!
Sadness no longer loomes over my head
Like a deep purple rain cloud,
My heart no longer feels dead
My life has a silver lining
My eyes can see the way you look at me

I feel alive
At the sight
of your face
At the sound
of your voice
At the touch
of your embrace

I am alive!






User Comments: [4]
Sammyyy
Community Member





Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 04:12am


hiya i like it lots


Psyche of souls
Community Member





Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 04:45am


loooooovvvvv it heart


Ozzyk1010
Community Member





Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 05:04am


good but try a little harder to keep the rythm of it.


WhiteStarLine
Community Member





Thu Jul 26, 2007 @ 05:04pm


its really good wife smile I like the ending but the starting needs a little work biggrin
Hey it sounds like a V.C. Andrews poem


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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