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The Fair Maidden

Chapter 1

A Slight Miscalculation



Jake: Year of 2007 at 6:34PM

Raiconiet: Date of year 789965, Day: the 16th of the week, and the time was at 15:89 OP

Ashpear: Date of year 3452886, Day: 5% of week, time: 90863313486875:765834657838899777.8908 WA






It was about time i had awaken to the new century...i streched my four legs and went for a quick run, then to find Yurai. Yurai had been not far from where i had awakened. I ran over to him and he was yawning and streching. He was alright, i just wanted to make sure he was ok. Then onto Wihi, my girlfriend. When i went to where she lived she was nowhere to be found. I was scared. Where had Wihi gone??? I trotted and ran in circles...i was pacing. Obviously my mind was rushing as fast as it could to find an answer. My 4 eyes looked at my hooves, then to my hands.....

<Had somthing bad happened to her?>

Thats all my mind could think about. I started to sweat. Even as the most feared race in the galaxy we could yet still be scared of many things. I ran out of her small hand-to-stone built house. I opened the silk curtains...she wasn't the richest of our kind, the Quaitai, which was why she only had silken curtains for doors instead of fine diamond doors. That was the regular type of door in my species. The most expensive would be a golden-trotted Red Diamond door. Which meaned it was hand made out of the finest, solidest, and most expensive materials in the universe. We had everything we needed on our planet, yet not to me....no not to me....my Wihi was missing....I hoped she had only gone down to the Ghanhai for a few minuts instead of leaving towards Hakaijai......

I started squealing my native tounge:

<Urakamai!!!! Urakamai!!!!! Haja ilotal in gaswiqa!!!!!! BAJA WIHI, BAJA WIHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>

I was scared, i was still young. I had many things to learn...before i could become a propper Quaitaian....that was the most importat thing i could be. A propper Quaitaian....But i no longer wanted to be a Quaitaian....We were feared, i was never let talk to any other species because before i could get a word in the ran away or flew off...I wanted to be a Ricamai.....yes, a Ricamai. The species that was inbetween. The species we never dared to be hunted, yet never dared to kill. They were beautiful herbaviors....unlike us ugly carnivors. We had no true mouth. All the other species teased me about it, and when i stomped a hoof for them to stop they scampered away afraid of my sharp blades that grew on my ugly purple body....

I HATED BEING A QUAITAIAN, I HATED IT!!!!!!

I wanted to kill myself right then and there....i had lost my girlfriend, my most valued possesion, to the deep. And i had lost all my other friends except Yurai, and other then that i had no idea where my family was. A young Quaitaian alone, i was sure to be unable to live, i had learned nothing of killing, i found it disturbing....yet everytime that i had gone to war they had picked me first as one of the leadings Captains. I must have been a very dangerouse weapon agenst other species, most likley their seacret weapon...but yet i would never accept it. I ran off, my species would have to find another secret weapon, because this alian was evolving...






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The Werepyre King
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 11, 2008 @ 11:08pm
i think that that story was slightly odd, but exelent,.


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