hey guys!! so sorry i havent been on, but i have a few new poems!! i want you to tell me if they suck and why 3nodding
Tears slide slowly down my face
and mentally i am gone.
i hear nothing but the hum of my
broken song.
the past twists tightly around my
swelling brain. the past that
takes away all the falling rain.
it all dies without the water, the
life that dwindles so i hold my
song so dear to me just to let it
go.
yet i see the smallest flower.
so delicate and thin, yet holding
on to life, from a strength from within,
refusing to let go.
so i smile faintly, wiping tears from my eyes,
and hear the familiar tune,
of my broken song.
ooook, well i want ot know what could make this better/more flowing.... and talk to me people!!! I have been working like crazy!! 9and1/2 hours today, thats about two and a half more thatn i was supposed to do!! joy... lots of fun! well, talk!!! blaugh
 Kiras_demon · Mon Jun 06, 2005 @ 05:24am · 3 Comments |
