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Brink of Death
As I reach the light to come to you
I feel a hand pulling on to me
In shock I struggle to escape
But each time that i struggle the hand pulls on to me harder
I scream and shout yet no one's there
I kick and punish yet all that hits is the shadows
I plead and cry to let me go
Yet still it pulls on me harder
Closed my eyes and wish to be free
Then voices I heard
As my eyes open
I see some familiar faces
Scare to be wound I cry in shame
As my tears drop
Faces of them came near me
Then right then and there that I realized it was their faces
The faces of the ones i cherish
For They have save me from the noisy street
From the heavy rain that pours down
From the darkness that bring despair
And from the lonely cold death that was awaiting me
For I have been saved because you have sent such angelic beings
Thank you for always watching and being there for me
For I am grateful

By: Miachan93



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miachan93
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Sat Dec 22, 2007 @ 12:34am


i may this at school then i change some stuff around!! lol i hope ya like it!!!!!!!!
anyway it's part 2 from the 1st poem i made!!! if ya don't like it then please just don't comment,ok? sweatdrop well i loved this poem it's nice kinda makes me wish i could be save like that!!!!


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