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kiwigal
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tell me what its like
Will you tell me what it is like in heaven now that you are there
are the anjels realy blue eyed with long golden hair
is you skin still light or has He darkened it a bit
and what about His table is there a place for you to sit
is your body still hurting or has he fixed that to
has he taken the old one and given you something new
Can you still see me here through all that pretty smoke
Could you would you hear me if I spoke
your house is empty now theres nothing left to say
ive been so sad here since you went away
I want to make you proud but dont know where start
its becoming so hard just to say whats in my heart
so please tell me mom, now that your away
does this place called heaven still exist today





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Shikomiso
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comment Commented on: Wed Jan 02, 2008 @ 08:21pm
Oh wow, that's a really deep poem there. You've made the lines rhyme and everything else!

Well most of your poem made me cry crying a little though


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