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Join Me In Death...
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Lily looked up ahead of them as they saw the landscape of the desert. The Land of Wind. Beside her walked her twin brother, Dartsu. His eyes were looking straight ahead but it seemed that he was lost in thought. Lily saw this and sighed. Her brother never looked like he was paying attention and it got him in alot of trouble with Lord Orochimaru. Dartsu suddenly took out a cigeratte from his weapon bag, put the end in his mouth, and lite the other end with the fire he emitted from his thumb.

He took a inhale of the nicotine and released smoke from his nostrils. " So...what are we doing at the Land of Wind, again?" He asked suddenly as he put the cigeratte back in his mouth. Lily looked at her brother and glared. " You idiot!!! If you actually listen to Orochimaru once and while and pay attention to the orders we are given then you would actually know what we are supposed to do!!! You moron!!! It amazes me that he hasn't killed you yet!!" She shouted grabbing ahold of her brothers shirt and punched him to the ground, knocking out his cigeratte as he fell with a loud thud.

Dartsu rubbed his head and groaned as he sat up on the ground. " Nn, but sister, his speeches get really tiresome and he drags them out instead of just telling us of what to do. And besides, he hasn't killed me yet because he knows it will greatly upset you. He does have a special interest in you, afterall," he replied in a low uncaring lazy voice.

Lily was going to hit him again when she suddenly stopped and felt herself blush. Her snake Aisha circled around her and hissed at Dartsu. The snake never liked her twin brother and if he embarrased her in any way or made her feel uncomfortable, she would either hiss or even attack him. Dartsu glared at the snake's eyes. He got up and brushed the dirt off his shoulder. " And he got you that annoying snake that always looks like she wants to eat me. Nn, what a nuisance," He sighed and then turned infront of him as Aisha hissed again at him. " Come on lets start walking again to......" he paused and then looked back at Lily, " Where to again?"

Lily sighed and started walking with Aisha layed her head on her master's shoulder. " You need to start paying attention, brother. We're going to the Sand village." She told him sternly.

Dartsu scratched the back of his head and sighed. " Yeah, yeah, I know."


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    chiaroscuro13
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    Mon Mar 31, 2008 @ 04:43am


    Great begining. I really like your charasmatic choice of words, they flow well which adds to the depth of involvment for the reader--nice and smooth. The red text gets kinda blurry against that lighter purple; maybe a darker purple background? Nice pic too.


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