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Peoms
this journal contains depressing poems. So if you don't like reading about people dying...then KEEP OUT. Scratch that. SOME of the poems are dark.
Beaten
She's running; Trying to get away
They're chasing; Trying to catch up
She drops her bag; Less weight, more speed
They throw; Missing each time
She's slowing down; Out of breath
They grin; Finally catching up
She's hit; Screams out in pain
They hit; Laughing at her pain
She falls; Tries to get up
They got her; kicks her back down
She screams; Trying to get free
They laugh; Hitting her and hitting her
She stops struggling; Finally giving in
They hit her harder and harder; Enjoying it
She sees a foot; Everything black
They hit her still; Stop
She's not moving; Motionless
They check her pulse; Nothing there
She's dead; At a young age
They killed; At a young age
Blood has been spilled this day; over favored color






User Comments: [1]
Maaku-Kun
Community Member





Tue Mar 25, 2008 @ 05:33am


Very nice! Erm, I got the impression that emotions were the they. Emotions hurt. sad

Question, do you always right about shes in your poems? I try to write about both, makes me think more and vary what I write about, but that's just me. I personally think it'd be interesting to read your perception of what goes through a guys mind in some sad situation.

Anyways, enough of me babbling, I seriously can't wait to talk to people again. xp


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