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Xlet_The Holy Darkness
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With you i'm happy, hyper and cheerful,
when you gone i cry and my heart hurts,
people say it's nothing,
it'll go away.
no, i say,
it will not go away,
it shall stay,
just like these wounds caused by you,
just like the deep wounds,
deep in my heart,
i say i'm sorry,
these words are not enough,
not enough to bring you back,
i know that,
but still,
i say them,
again and again,
hoping against all odds,
that they will work,
that you will turn around and look at me again,
with those kind eyes and gentle smile,
i'm sorry, i'm sorry, i'm sorry
that last words that leave my lips,
crimson surrounds me, followed by black,
you,
you are the one i bleed for,
the one that will not turn around,
the one i could say nothing to


just another Poem by me, sorry i'm a dark poem writer






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purplpenguin
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comment Commented on: Sun Apr 20, 2008 @ 01:35am
I thought it was beautiful. I'm a dark writer myself, but I'm not one for poems. Anyway, congrats, and good job.


comment Commented on: Fri Apr 25, 2008 @ 09:58pm
good job.. i write poems too... nothin like this though. this is great!



ClingyKiwi
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