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Xlet_The Holy Darkness
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Twin crimson ribbon's mark his arms,
Hidden beneath the heavy cloth,
The tears hidden with black outlines,

No one asked, no one cared,
About the beautiful eyes glassed over,
Sorrow hiding them,
Hiding the fire of life with it's bleakness,

The crimson ribbon's grow,
Many more show as day's pass,
Bring new pain to him,

The black blanket covers's him,
People in blue suits ask,
ask about the one no one knows,
about the crimson ribbons,

They all shake their heads,
holding the one's they love,
Yet none step forward for him,
The crimson ribbon's forever on him,

No one cared, No one saw those crimson ribbons,
No one saw those beautiful eyes glasses over,
They only saw the black blanket and blue suits.


ok so to explain to those who don't understand, the first verse is talking about a guy covering the cuts on his arms and putting on eyeliner to hid the tears, the second verse is about how no one seemed to notice that he was cutting him self and needed help, the third verse is talking about how the cuts on his arms grow with each new day and pain, the fourth is about his death, the black blanket referring to the black body bags, blue suits to the police, the fifth is about how no one knew him or the pain he was going through and the last is....well i'm not to sure it wraps it up i guess.






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momo_kitty
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comment Commented on: Mon Aug 11, 2008 @ 12:55pm
OMG that's beautiful!!! It gets a 1000 out of 10!!!
and I love the meaning behind it- much deeper than the drivel the wannabes put out. ^_^


comment Commented on: Wed Aug 20, 2008 @ 10:12am
Lace is right, has alot of meaning to it cry



renoizmine
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