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This is a poem excerpt from a book I'm writing called "Through The Wolf's Eyes" which is also the name of the poem. In the story, the poem is written by the leading lady, Evelyn. She writes it about a vampire named Zaide, the main character. He was never meant to see it. Enjoy, my few readers. Also, pay very close attention to the line organization, punctuation, and paragraphing, it is very important, read between the lines and use your imagination!!!!





Sing to the moon, my Zaide
My Zaide
For finally, your mind is clear enough to see it.

You bring out your fur,
Only slightly more pale
Than your ashen human flesh.

But your human flesh is dead and damned
To feed on crimson life.

Now you see through golen eyes,
A wolf's eyes.

You prance and strut,
Finally proud of what you are.

When it's through the wolf's eyes yo see,
I see a child.
Running.
Free.

Dog kisses and wagging tails,
Playfullness only brought by canine fangs.
Fangs natural and alive.

Come home to me soon,
We can sing to the moon.
Come back to me,
My Zaide, my Zaide.






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marikslovebunny_kam
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commentCommented on: Fri May 09, 2008 @ 03:05am
good job hun!!
SOO mysteriouse and cool. werewolves and vampires turn me on, lol. jk, love ya!!
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commentCommented on: Sat May 10, 2008 @ 10:30pm
this is the only part that i see something wrong with

When it's through the wolf's eyes yo see

and its the yo shouldn't it be you



Lord Ratchet
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thiefempress_625
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commentCommented on: Mon May 26, 2008 @ 04:00pm
Thanks Lord Ratchet for pointing out the error. Hope everyone enjoys it!!!!!!!!!!!


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 14, 2008 @ 04:16am
*eats poem* and now i shall digest it. > surprised



PoofleMcSausage
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