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Thats really cute oh and btw I love your hand writting for the signature ;D
They look so cute together!

Not my hand writing, that was a font I added by using the "Paint" program... Oi wait... Its May now isn't it... I have to go change that from April to May... -_-

Oh that's really good! So that's Sana and Sorraean from the second series, huh? Well you can definatly draw two people together way better than I can, that's for sure. Um... I dunno... I'm no good at critisizing drawings that are ten times better than mine! I dunno, maybe try darkening the lines then use a kneaded eraser to get rid of all the sketchy lines, 'cause that gets really annoying erasing them with a regular one...

never seen you draw two people before, and I must say, this looks amazing. I swear you are too hard on your own skills man, this is awesome. Then again, I'm not much of an artist myself, so what do I know? XD

your getting better. time to learn inking and shading, if your goal is manga. also, try starting out at least 1 page mini mangas, as drawing a pic and drawing a manga are very different.ill leave with only that for now

I dunt know what this "Series" is..but they is cool. And by "hair tail" do you mean pony tail xD? But yeah this is very good. I m not artist eaither but I can still say its great. Though my fave artist on gaia is Moo (No offense).

~Haze

Okay, wow. That looks awesome colored! I love the background! And the the transparent Sana and Sorraean thing behind them was like... Genius! That looks so awesome!

wow, and i agree with ..well.. mostly everyone who commented before me lol. but yah you are too hard on yourself.. but .. i guess that's a good thing that your pushing yourself to aim towards improving even tho i must say that your already good but that's your wish and your dream so i respect that thho. ^-^
anyways, it's good your getting alot better, and like tatsu says you should actually try drawing a little mini comic thing or... something.. idk.. it's up to you i guess to try it for some practice ^-^ when you do please tell me so i can comment. and they do look so cute together, great job ^-^
and i must give my props to Darling Chibi Tenshi too. Very nice with the coloring, something i would never be able to do @_@
i'm not much as a colorer and i'm still working on my shading. Hm.. Your pretty good at shading as it is, but maybe you can work on giving different techniques in shading to make them stand out more and well give the presence of light and 3-D? o.0 heh idk wat i saying but hope you somewhhat get what i'm saying. on a random note, I'm writting alot again, yay! I'm back! biggrin
anyways... hmm.. i'm staring at the drawing and looking at every line there but not much i see that needs editing or work on. The clothes lines are good and acurate. overall great two people drawing. And.. o_O new series? ohh i haven't even finsish the first... barely.. unless you haven't worked on it. but problem is i'm usually caught in doing stuff that i'm too busy to read it which is a suckish thhing on my point because your story's going so good ^-^... last i remember that is. ^-^;;
but yeah.. keep up the good work, and same with Darling Chibi Tenshi. blaugh