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Trapt In There Somewhere....A Simple Tool To Escape
These are thoughts of elaborate schemes and mechanisms that enter the mind about this world around us.
Promised vallies of fields of amber grain swaying in the breeze during a sunny cloudless day seem to be turning into vallies of slick cude oil killing anything and everything it come in contact with.
The big maple tree I dreamed of sitting under on top for a hill overlooking these fields has turned into cold steel power lines that deliver the power needed for people to waste their live.
The smiling face of a girl wearing a yellow sundress I once knew and loved so dearly with everything in my heart has turned into a ragged dirty face of a woman on the street who selss her body to just get by in a life that tore her insides out everyday.
The once silent clear blue sky I used to love and turn to for warmth and comfort has been polluted with bomber exhaust and smog from the cities which serve as a center of filth and immorality.
The child who had been care free now saw his goals and dreams twisted and tortured out of exsistance. The days he spent picturing sitting under his maple tree over looking the golden field of grain swaying in the breeze with the girl in the yellow sundress now seemed to be for nothing.






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Xx_Fallen Spirit_xX
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commentCommented on: Sat May 17, 2008 @ 04:52pm
I read through your stories, I thought they were very deep and well written. Especially this one, I've never read a story that describes the current state of this world so well.


commentCommented on: Tue May 20, 2008 @ 02:57am
its really good.
i love reading your writting, you can just imagine everything as your reading it.



Sammers717
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Mistress Spider
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 23, 2008 @ 07:20pm
o.o
Maybe my new color theme for my avi should be green!
Because green is the color for envy, and I sincerely envy your talent! XD
Tis really very amazing! ^_^


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 04:53am
That is quite a beautiful piece of work.



Sinful Heartbeat
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