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The following content has swear words. DO NOT--I repeat, DO NOT--read this if you are not comfortable with such things.
This is written for no good reason, whatsoever. Answer the little question at the end pweasee? Gracias lovelies. <3
Btw, the female character is nameless. o3o Make up a name for her, neh?

To moi lil' pointless storeh -sailor person accent-;

She pulled out of the kiss first for once, staring up at his flawless face, her expression serene and loving. She put her hand up and ran it down his cheek, a tender gesture. As the eighteen year old drew her hand away, he smiled at her. No one in the crowded hallway even paused to look. They were used to such behavior, of course. The girl brought her hand back, this time which as much force as she could muster. He stumbled sideways, struck dumb by this sudden display of violence. "******** b*****d." She growled, tone low and angry. Now people were glancing their way, vaguely curious but in a hurry to get to their next classes. "******** b*****d!" She cried, her voice escalating though the octaves, and in volume. "I saw you! I saw you! All this time! You've been cheating on me with her?!" He couldnt even answer the question, his hand still against his cheek where she had struck him. Not that she would give him a chance to explain. "Some tiny, prissy, slow-minded blonde girl? Dont you deserve better?! Dont I?" She grabbed him by the collar, pulling him closer to her face. Her green eyes flashed angrily. "Since second grade, Damian. Second grade! I had a crush on you that long. We were best friends, you know. And you liked me too. I know you did. We started dating in 7th grade. Five years. And you were dating her the whole time! Why?" Her voice was a mere whisper now, tears welling up in her eyes. Frustrated, she blinked them away, pushing Damian and taking a step back. "Do you have anything to say? At all?" Damian didnt. He stayed completely silent, blankly staring at her. She turned on her heel and stomped away, flicking a sheet of long red hair over her shoulder as she went. Over her shoulder she called, "I hate you Damian Carlson! I hate you and I never want to see you again!" Not one teacher or student who had come out of their classrooms to see what the fuss was about tried to stop her as she dashed from the school, completely blowing a full day of classes. As she left, a blue-eyed girl weaved through the crowd. She had a thin face, a beautiful frame, and flowing, curly blonde hair. She wrapped her arms around Damian's waist, dreamily looking up into his face as if nothing had happened.

Did you likee it?
Did you get into it? I did when I was writing it. o3o;






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blueberried
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commentCommented on: Sun May 18, 2008 @ 07:00pm
Holy crud o.o That was awesome.
I like it even if it's short. I love love love how it's written! Awesome job Miyuki xD -claps-


commentCommented on: Sun May 18, 2008 @ 07:18pm
o3o Yeah, it is kinda short.
I didnt have much else to put at the begining or end.
Thankyous! ;D



clockworkravens
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One80Degrees
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commentCommented on: Sun May 18, 2008 @ 07:42pm
Omg I LOVE IT!!!! blaugh blaugh


commentCommented on: Mon May 19, 2008 @ 03:45am
1.wow biggrin that was really good! Yes, i liked it ^^ Very well done!! WOOT
2.yees *___* i want to keep reading!! are you gonna write more to it perhaps? sweatdrop



Z3M0G
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