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Your Defeat This ache that burns inside my heart, I know that now that we must part. With all the pain you're put me through, I know this is what I must do. I now see you through all your lies, The girl that I truly despise. I now see you for who you are, That you have truly gone too far. To think that I once trusted you, And all the things I've done for you, And if our eyes shall ever meet, My eyes shall tell of your defeat. ~Ordiserria

Posted by: Ordiserria Mon Aug 15, 2005 @ 04:12pm

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Commented on: Tue Aug 16, 2005 @ 02:28am


	Nice poem, abeit a little depressing.

Commented on: Wed Aug 17, 2005 @ 03:52pm


	Most of my poems are...but its mostly because truth is depressing....most of my poems are written about people or things that have happened that are true. Therefore my poems are depressing. That and I can't get myself to write anything happy and filled with warm, fluffy goodness. sweatdrop

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