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its all about me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ch 1
The Begnning

I was breathing heavy as i ran through the forest for my life. I could hear that they were close to me so i knew that i had little time, but there was no way i was going down without a fight! I stopped running and turned around to face the, wait you probly have no idea what im talking about, let me start at the begnning.

PUSH PUSH its a girl!!
woa woa thats too far back!!

ok, this is better, i'll start with my name, Krissy, this tragic tale of my life started on my sixteenth birthday................






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Jahromi
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 01, 2008 @ 08:53pm
you got a good hook, but you need to type you story like it was an english essay worth 99% of your final grade. punctuation and spelling is a must for these things. but otherwise good.


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 01, 2008 @ 09:02pm
yay thx u
btw my comments don't count as the 2 comments



The Blue Beauty
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-Ninetails-Angel
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 11, 2008 @ 01:29am
WOW, that was fantastic!


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