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The Moon Journal
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The Enchanted Story
BEFORE YOU READ THIS KNOW THAT THERE ARE ERRORS!!! I WAS TIRED WHEN I MADE THIS AND I DIDN'T WANT TO GO BACK AND CORRECT THE ERRORS IN IT!!!
AND YES I DID MAKE THIS UP!! THIS WAS STARTED AT 10:40 PM AND I FINISHED AT 12:04 AM. ^^ ENJOY...*goes to sleep*


Past:
Once there was a girl, named Moon, that was forced to clean her step mother's house everyday. She could never go any where, not even outside, because of her evil step mother.


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On the day of the ball, of course Moon wanted to go, but because of her evil step mother and sisters she couldn't go anywhere. She had to stay home and mop the floors. crying


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Moon's fairy god mother heard her crys and wanted to help her. "Moon", she said with a smile on her face. "If you stop crying I'll put you in a beautiful dress and you can go to the ball." Moon dried her tears. "Really?" she said to the fairy. "Yes, Now dry your tears." Said the god mother.


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With a wave of her wand Moon's servant dress was transformed into a beautiful gown. "Did you have to make it pink?" Moon said. "Sorry I gave the blue one to Cindy." said the god mother.


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"Moon you have to be out of that dress by 12:00 a.m.", said the god mother. "Why?", Moon questioned. "If you are not very bad things will happen. Promise that you will be changed into something else other than that dress by 12:00 a.m." Moon nodded, then got in a magical catolack (XDD) and drove off.


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Moon of course was the most beautiful girl at the ball. She dance, met cute guys, she even got a few phone numbers. When moon finally looked at the clock it was 12:30. "Oh crap", she said when she looked at the clock. She got in the car and begin to drive home. "I have to get out of this dress", she said to her self. She got out the car and ran inside to the bathroom. When she looked at the dress it was torn and ripped. "Is this the bad thing she warned me about?"


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Moon looked at the dress. "Oh well its no good now." She began to take the dress off. "Whats going on?" Moon said. "The dress will not come off!" She pulled at the torn dress trying to rip it off her. A pain shot threw her body. Moon yelled in pain. "Ah!"....black out...


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Moon awoke the next morning different. "What happened?," She said as she got up off the floor. She screamed as she saw a monster in the mirror..then she realized that the monster was her. She was now a vampire, a blood thirsty vampire.


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She fell to the floor and started crying. "No, how could this happen." "I told you to change out of the dress before 12:00 but no you didn't listen to me, so now you're a vampire." The god mother told her. Moon stood up. "Oh well, now I call kill that woman and her daughters." Moon smiled evilly. "And everyone else that gets in my way." "Do you have no heart!" The god mother screamed. "I've been reborn I don't have a heart or need one." "You demon!" The god mother shouted. "Yes demon...moon demon of hearts. Now give me some vampire atire or I'll kill you." The fairy quickly did what Moon said then vanished.


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Moon walked down stairs. "Moon where have you bee...." The step mother's voice trailed off. "Die old woman." Moon said in an evil tone. She quickly killed the old lady and her two daughers. "Now I will kill everyone I hate, every one will pay with there lives." Moon laughed evilly.


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Present:
Moon demon of hearts is an evil vampire that will steal the hearts of men and never give them back. twisted Bewere Moon demon of hearts....

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The End.....Or Is It...Only I Know....*evil laugh*


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  • User Comments: [5]
    xXxKirstyKalonxXx
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    Fri Aug 29, 2008 @ 06:37am


    omg omg omg! that's amazingly awesome! i love it!


    Norano the fear
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    Sat Aug 30, 2008 @ 01:46am


    really creative!


    the4thE
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    Tue Sep 02, 2008 @ 10:22pm


    sweet XD it reminds me of somebody


    xXxDylanDestructionxXx
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    Sat Sep 20, 2008 @ 04:05am


    i love the story.....it sounded like a cinderella plot, but twisted....it's great. ^^


    xNekoAngelx
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    Sun Dec 28, 2008 @ 04:44pm


    i think my mommy told me the wrong story when i was little ; o ; this ones not the same...


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