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Please leave comments on my poetry. I work really hard!!!
I also have avi art and donated lists in my journal, so take a look!
SCREAM!
Scream!




Toe curling
Spine tingling
Hair standing
Scream

Brain freezing
Blood chilling
Freak tantrum
Scream
Yell
Shriek
Scream!

Then it's over.
Quiet
Restful
Peaceful
Silence

Endless
Calmness
Emotionless
Silence

Tired
Sleepy
Exhausted
Silence

Too tired to scream
Too tired to be silent

Must sleep
Not a peep
Goodnight


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  • User Comments: [5]
    Silver Lemon Drop 003 IV
    Community Member





    Sat Sep 06, 2008 @ 02:40pm


    Please Please Please add a comment! Also, I have 2 poems in the Arena, Search by scream, or my name, please vote! It Means alot to me.


    sk8_king7
    Community Member





    Mon Sep 29, 2008 @ 01:34am


    it's cool but to tell u tha truth ....i dont get it.
    good job tho


    Edward_Elric_18_20
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    Mon Sep 29, 2008 @ 11:55pm


    very good


    Jesse The Maniac
    Community Member





    Thu Oct 09, 2008 @ 05:56pm


    Miss I love poems an I hope you take this very lightly well the poem is good but needs a little more work in a sense that I don't get but I love the theme of screaming,sleeping an silence the inner theme of it that it has I cant pear through it but in time I will hope you tell me anything about my poems also miss.


    K0RRA
    Community Member





    Sun Sep 12, 2010 @ 10:54pm


    very very good!


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