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an old man's tale.
whatever i feel like writing.
ride of hell
as they walked onto their transpotation, it was 2 to a seat. james ans jake sat in one as jay went into another. marge came and sat down beside him. he looked to the window and frowned, as of he was hoping to catch a sight of the girl. marge poked him. "hi! im marge, whats your name?" "uh... jay... i didnt think they let girls into the fight" her eyes blazed at this "we're here to cook for you ingrates! be happy!" "sure, sorry." as the bus went on, he was interogatted about random stuff witch he paid no attention to. he sighed and she jabbed him in the ribs hard. "are you paying attention?" "depends to what it is." " to me?" "no, sorry." she glared furiously. a wrong thing to say. he turned back to his original position and stared at the back of the girls hair.

finally, he turned to marge and looked at her "who were those two you got on with?" "oh! that was Rose and Alice." "which one is which?" well, rose has the honey hair and alice is the other. why?" "just asking" "you like one of them?" "no, just didnt get alice's name when i danced with her, was curious." "oh! ok." she smiled at him almost trying to convince him. "want me to call them over?" his eyes widened and his spine went ridgid at the thought. "no!" "why not?" "because" "because isnt an answear!" "well it is to me!" she was glowing with curiousity at what would happen. "fine" as she pretended to pout. he finally relaxed.

suddennly, she shouted "HEY! ROSE! ALICE! FREE SEAT AHEAD OF ME!"
jay sank down in the seat "damnation" she grinned as they came over. rose slid in infront of him and alice infront of marge. "thanks marge" her musical voice made jay sink lower and wish he was invisible. "no problem meet Jay" alice almost had to stand over the seat to see him "hel... hey! its you!" "er......yeah. i guess it is." he wished as hard as he could that rose didnt say hi. she kneeled over the seat. "hi"

he couldnt say a thing, so he just nodded. he couldnt remember his own name. all of his brain was mashed into oblivion by her simple word, appearence, and smell. The bus jerked to a halt, and they unloaded. Jay stalked off before the girls had a chance to say goodbye.

as the three looked alice spoke up "what the hell? he just left us!" rose just simply didnt says anyting. marge did. "yeah, atleast we got his name, and we can peg him down later! who gets dibs?" rose spat out at them "how about whoever he choses!" the other two were gaping at her "whoa, rose, chill down. just a joke." "whatever, lets go find our room." when rose was in the bathroom, alice whispered to marge " i think jay is that guy rose DIDNT dance with" "definatly."






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Phoenix_fly
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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 10, 2008 @ 10:14am
you were really head over heals in that time jord.
^_^
one knows everytime when one meets the soulmate for life.
eager to know what happens next.


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