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Some poems I wrote
The day you left

You promised me you'd never leave me.
I believed in you & loved you deeply.

Then I told you when you call I'd be here.
You smiled & said you'd always be near.

You grabbed my hands & looked into my eyes.
I felt your skin & within your hands my heart lies.

I kissed your cheek as we walked down the street.
You looked up at me & said when we die in heaven we'll meet.

I said to you, you won't die I will protect you.
But a drunk driver was rushing toward us, if only I knew.

In a split second she was gone from my side.
I knew what had happened but the reality I tried to hide.

You said you'd never leave, that you'd always be here.
But you're gone even though I held you so dear.

It wouldn't be so hard if only I could see.
The reason why on this day you left me.






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TrudytheeGreat
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 03, 2008 @ 01:00am
awwh =[

:3


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 16, 2008 @ 01:35am
wow that is really good XP its not just good its amazing heart i luv it



mangaluvr527
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SpacedOut420
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 19, 2008 @ 04:03am
I'm sorry she died....

That's sad and...touching...
I cant even imagine how I could go on in life if......well...I ever lost you.

I'm sorry...I wish that some how I could have been there to push her out of the way.......Taken the punishmet for the inosent soul that was lost.


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 19, 2008 @ 04:34am



ImSilentlyScreaming
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YesImThatRandomGirl
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 19, 2008 @ 05:37pm
this is so amazing there's not even a word for it


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 10, 2008 @ 09:46pm
Wow..

Thats amazing n_n x heart



xXoX--S--XoXx
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l Captivate l
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 25, 2008 @ 04:03am
awwhh, there's no words to described that.


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 27, 2008 @ 06:50pm
heart aww thats so sad crying i almost cried heart



XXPunkGothicVampireXX
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Carnivorous Hello Kitty
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commentCommented on: Mon Dec 29, 2008 @ 04:23am
I like ur poetry. U write better poetry then I do.


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 19, 2009 @ 10:39am
Aww Cute smile There Really Short... But Good smile xd



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Tsukasa_Chan_1
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 28, 2009 @ 02:31am
this is good!!! ;o;


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 17, 2009 @ 12:51am
That must be horrible.. T____T
*hugs*



xl Porcelain Doll lx
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iAmzinq
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commentCommented on: Sat Apr 03, 2010 @ 03:29pm
omg , this poem made me cry,
about the way they had to say good-bye.
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i like to write about the dove,
where it represents everyone's love.


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 24, 2010 @ 12:33pm
Now I am sad. sad I feel bad for you. But the poem was great.



Madame Eponine
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