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poems that i wrote SAY THERE BAD AND DIE!!!
im really quite....shy...i have jet black hair.i like anime.i was on a poetry team.im 5'5'' tall. i like to piss off my friends....its fun
i thought u were different
i thought u were pure
i thought u were everything
that i could adore
i thought of u and
i thought love
i thought u were my angel
sent from above
i thought u were strong
i thought u were brave
i thought i'd b honored
if i took ur name
i thought i was right
but i know that i'm wrong
the man i thought loved me
is now long gone
i thought love was real
i thought love was grand
but i'd rather die
than take anyones hand






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the view to a kill
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 02, 2008 @ 03:40am
I luff this one!! I like how in the begining it's very "love", but you keep it in past tense, then at the end you make it present tense and change it to resentment- way awesome!! ^.^

~Mi domokun


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 02, 2008 @ 05:38am
That's good smile



MORGAN equals Love
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