a song i wrote
still unfinished u___u
"drowning"
I think I'm drowning
I really quite like it
I think I'm falling
wish you'd do this more often
I think I'm drowning
I really quite like it
and I'm hanging on to every word you say
and I'm melting with the way you say my name
hey
say what you say
cause you know what I wanna hear
you're making it very clear
hey
let it always be this way
just hold me like I want you to
do the things you always do
for me
still unfinished u___u
"drowning"
I think I'm drowning
I really quite like it
I think I'm falling
wish you'd do this more often
I think I'm drowning
I really quite like it
and I'm hanging on to every word you say
and I'm melting with the way you say my name
hey
say what you say
cause you know what I wanna hear
you're making it very clear
hey
let it always be this way
just hold me like I want you to
do the things you always do
for me
zounds
Community Member
Great song. I'll tell you why instead of just possibly making you think I was just saying so because I like you.
First, the name of the song is great. It's a word that's used a lot but there hasn't been any hit songs or middle-stream songs I've seen with it. Symbolism is key and that's my next point.
Second, the symbolism. I totally get it and it isn't tacky by any means.
Third, I found myself setting my own voice to it. You know a song is good when you're singing a song with no words or beat.
Very very well done.