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Poem: Life
poem: Life

life is never what its planned out to be
sometimes thats good
sometims thats bad
what goes around comes around
and ive learned that
but where do i stand in life???
where do i fall???
what do i have???
what do i not??
you learn more from failure than success
hell thats true
one thing ive larned is that failing is not so fun
when you go throough life
you ask yourself,
do i have true friends??
will they be there if i fall???
will they be there if i dont???
are they really true??
or are they just fake???
you never know
but you always want to
but i dont
the furture is to much to handle
i stay with the present
if i fail, i fail
if i succeed, i succeed
do i really know when it will happen?
no
do i really want to know when i will fail?
no
do i want to know all of my life and never be suprised???
no
i am not gonna sit around and wonder
not this time
i am gonna do something with my life in the present
not that i am not a good person
but maybe it will affect my future
what if i help and old lady cross the street??
will she tell her grandchildren
and will they one day thankme??
jsut think, just think....


by: actingdude34






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rockinsoccergirl
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 04, 2008 @ 03:04am
love it!!!! and IM one of those true friends(i think)also, the ending line just sums up the whole poem, IT ROX! domokun


commentCommented on: Sat Oct 04, 2008 @ 08:17pm
hmm.. >____>



MyDino
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