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Bad To The Bone!
It's the moment we've all been waiting for... Chapter one of Hypno Girl!
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Chapter 1: Why Me?
Everyone has that feeling when their life turns around and they get confused where they stand in this world, the person who has felt this probably the most is a girl named Celia...

Celia's eyes fluttered open revealing her older sister jumping on the bed. "W...W...What do you want..." Celia squinted at the alarm clock. "It's only 12 A.M?" Celia's older sister nodded. "Two words: Club-Ing." Celia shook her head but then felt others lift her up. It was her older sister's 2 friends. In the midist of bicoring, Celia found her self dressed, out the door, and in the car. "I can't believe you..." Celia mumbled aloud. "What don't you believe, that I'm taking you clubbing for the first time?" Came her sister's voice from the drivers seat. Celia rolled her eyes in disgust. When the car turned a curb revealing a building with neon everywhere and music blaring Celia felt butterflies in her stoumach. She slowly got out of the back seat and shut the door. As she walked into the club, there was a bar, stage, DJ booth, and dance floor. "Me and my friends are getting some drinks, are you fine by yourself?" Asked Celia's sister. Surprised that she could even hear her sister's voice, Celia nodded. Celia decided to dance a bit. She just shook lightly from side to side. A boy about her age came up to her. "Wanna get a drink, I'll buy?" Celia shook her head no. "Come on... I will ask them not to overdose it?" Celia shook her head no. "It'll help you dance better?" "DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND THE MEANING OF NO!?!" Celia shouted. Everyone turned and stared at her, Celia blushed and waited for everyone to resume. He pulled her in and looked her in the eyes. "Shyness leads to bitterness... And you wouldn't want that my dear..." He then pushed her into a chair, and kissed her on the neck. All of a sudden, she felt something stick into her neck and she then passed out. Celia awoke to her sister and her sister's friends standing over her. "Awww... Little Celia couldn't dance and talk at the same time?" Celia's sister teased. Celia scowled. Once Celia got home... She was fast asleep. "Mmmm... My head hurts... How did I end up on the floor?" Celia said as she awoke. Celia got up and looked into her mirror. What Celia saw looked nothing like herself. Celia touched her face and body. "W...W...What happened to me?" Celia said. Celia had a quick thought and sat on her bed as she turned on her TV. A news reporter appeared on the screen. " I always wonder what they are thinking about?" Celia then had an uncrontrolable thought that wasn't hers. "Woah... Did I just hack into the mind of a news reporter?" Celia then turned her attention to the news. "There seems to be a robery at the local bank... Who can stop them in time?" Came the news reporters voice. I could use my new skills for good... Celia thought. Celia then ran as fast as she could to the local bank. "Woah... Superspeed... THAT could come in handy!" Celia saw the robbers exit the bank and all of a sudden they began to float in mid air. "Cool I have tecanesis!" Celia slammed the robbers againsgt the brick wall. "Wh are ou working for!" While in a chokehold, both robbers gave an answer. "Just go down by the old warehouse on 187 Whiticer Lane." And wit that he robbers loaded up i the police vehicle and Celia sped to the warehouse. She walked in noticing a fine room that almost look like a mansion. "Wow... A pimped out warehouse..." Echoed Celia's voice throughout the building. Beyond a few curtains, in the shadows, sat someone watching the news. The mysterious person began clapping, startling Celia. "Brovo... Good show miss... You seem to be a good-looking superhero..." "Who are you?" Celia asked prepared to fight. A long alastic arm stretched around her waist and pulled her in. "I am Vincent and I will be your villan for the evening." He gave an evil smirk and he held her tight.

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Find out Hypno Gir's fate on the next amazing chapter of:
The Marvelous Tales Of: Hypno Girl





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    commentCommented on: Fri Nov 07, 2008 @ 12:18am
    Did yall' like it?


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