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Doctor
there once was a doctor
a very foolish man
who came inside a hospital
with no further demand
as he walked into his office
w/ pen and paper in each hand
he screamed and shreeked
for he had seen one surprise
a patient on his table
with a scratch in each eye
as he talked to her carefully
she had no further responce
as he realised she was no human
but a prank by his son
why would his son do so?
why would his son attempt?
how could his son get into his fathers office?
that was locked for the day
what clues, what clues






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gabbel
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 16, 2008 @ 01:38am
hmm...... interesting. i like the beginning to it. but how did the son get in?
could be like a story/ poem, kinda thing. makes me wonder! mrgreen


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