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iFlowers
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A review of Twilight.
Twilight.That's a word that many would reconize,in either love or hate.My review of the book may anger some,bring joy to others.My opinion is that Twilight was not very well written.There were many errors.There wasn't much of a plot,the characters weren't believable at all,and there were many grammatical errors.Edward and Bella's relationship(or lack of)was a horrible influence on girls everywhere.Many wish they were Bella,because of Edward.What they don't get is that Edward is an abusive,controlling person.Meyer tried to cover that up with his beauty.Bella is like an overgrown child.She doesn't even care for her kind,caring father.Bella's world revolves around her and Edward.That's not true love.That's lust.A women should have a life outside her relationship.Bella fell apart when Edward left for a little bit.That's stupid.Also,what vampire sparkles?Vampires are supposed to either burn in the sun or die in the sun.The vampires should at least get sunspots on their skin while their outside.Many of the other characters are perfect,too.They have no flaws.None.Nothing has no flaws,but real life doesn't matter in the hell Meyer made.The only character I really liked was Charlie.The book also didn't have much of a plot.The book revolved around Edward and Bella's unhealthy relationship.I hated Jacob's sudden personality change.I also hated Renesmee. She was too perfect,too wonderful.Nothing in the world is like Renesmee.Nothing has her perfection.Books should suck in,make you feel you're actually there.Twilight didn't do that for me.Ok,I'm done with my rant.Don't give me any comments that say,"You need to stop","No one cares about your opinion","Go to hell,""You are hurting Stephenie's feelings(I don't even care about S Meyer's feelings.)."or anything else like that.Comment now.




 
 
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