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I l.o.v.e.d y.o.u...
I love you ... I said to as we walked down that narrow lonely
street. I watched your face as we walked together the way your smile lightened up as you looked at me... you seemed so happy gust to be with me, and then one day you said those wonderful words I love you...but then on that horrible day that's still in my memories I saw you with HER that incarnation of death! how could you leave me for her... wasn’t I good enough for!!! you I laid out my heart for you and you through it away like it was a piece of dirt you didn’t even care HOW COULD YOU PERTENDED TO LOVE ME! ... YOU TOOK MY HEART AND DESTROYD IT LIKE YOU DIDNT EVEN CARE!!! YOU LET ME KEEP ON GOING THINKING YOU WERE ALLWAYS GOING TO BE THERE BUT NOW YOU TELL HER YOU LOVE HER AND THAT YOU'D MADE A MISTAKE LOVEING ANYONE ELSE BUT HER WITH ME STANDING RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU !!! YOU TORE ME UP AND THROUGH ME AWAY LIKE I WAS NOTHING AND WENT ON TO THE NEXT GIRL!!! NOW I KNOW LOVEING YOU WAS THE WORST MISTAKE I'V EVER MADE!!!... now I know loving was a mistake. . .






User Comments: [2]
saya_heartnet
Community Member





Tue Oct 28, 2008 @ 12:26am


thats good but you gave to look at it again... ALOT OF TYPO'S!!! >x<
XD other than that look at punctuation, and it good. ^^


saya_heartnet
Community Member





Tue Oct 28, 2008 @ 02:42am


yay its fixed! VERRY GOOD!!!


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