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Dying Hopes 3 Dying Hopes 3(Written by:The Black Angel of Chaosx) (The "Dying Hopes" series is based on true events in my life.) Feeling left out peer presure builds and that empty spot of knowing you don't belong feels Lusting for acceptance, fear within Knowing secound chances don't come unless though sin Swaying your beliefs to be Mr."it" to be relaxed and cool to get the chick To naive to know dreams really don't come true but let's not stop now, the story isn't through So he slip's in to darkness for his 15 minutes of fame completely unaware of how his apart of a bigger game But were young and life is new surely everyone has made a mistake or two So as feelings colide, the thoughts of hopes and dreams with her subside and everying dies just like your broken pride inside And images of her flash through your mind distracting reality, affecting with time And while your writing this down you know your out of time then complete emptiness steals your mind "So I looked for love but couldn't find it I gave you my soul but you still denided it I''ve failed myself and couldn't hide it now with a dead reality my parent's find it" Becasue I hate what i've become and now i'm permanently numb...

Posted by: The Black Angel of Chaosx Mon Dec 15, 2008 @ 09:49am

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Waiting Porcelain
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Commented on: Mon Dec 15, 2008 @ 11:41pm


	!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was your best poem yet!! Oh my goodness. I loved it. =] You must you must send PM explaining what real life stuff it's about, okay?? I'll wait for it. Now comes the icky part. D= 5th stanza it should be 'he's a part' 6th stanza should say 'we're' 10th should say 'denied' and 11th should be 'parents' without the ' love it though =] love you too, my aspiring poet <3333333333

Commented on: Wed Dec 17, 2008 @ 02:33am


	I love you too Stef!!! heart heart heart Thank you so much for your support!!!! I'll tell you about what the poem is about later kay. ^ ^

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Commented on: Wed Dec 17, 2008 @ 03:27am


	omg thats so good and well written smile

Commented on: Wed Dec 17, 2008 @ 06:07pm


	yeah... what is that poem about? o_O if you wanna tell me that is ^-^ but wow your really worked for it this time, i'm impressed blaugh it's really good it all flows pretty well this time, lol grammar mistakes but hey that's why you have stef as u editor lol lol also there's no "u" in second lol but ah yeah just grammar... and spelling but that's it, other than that the message and over all feeling to this poem is amazing! razz keep up the great work chris! you're getting better!! blaugh

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Commented on: Sat Dec 20, 2008 @ 06:53am


	Thank You Everyone!!! You all help me write better poetry!!! Oh, and sorry for the spelling errors ^_^"".

Commented on: Wed Dec 24, 2008 @ 04:52pm


	lol, when i saw your status as "dying hopes 3 out today" i thought u were talkin about a wii game at first ^^;

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Commented on: Fri Dec 26, 2008 @ 06:09am


	LMAO! Dude nice one. Maybe I should put poem next time lol.

Commented on: Sat Dec 05, 2009 @ 05:26pm


	WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW I love the poem is the most impressing and very perfect written!!!!! Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Commented on: Wed Dec 30, 2009 @ 10:15pm

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