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Untitled poem Untitled I’ll keep the memories of you, In my mind forever. You remain in my heart. Time is just a part of me, For forever you will see, I’ll wait until the life is dead, For you to come back to me. No more tears will be shed, It’s too hard to break. All matter will soon be dust, This is getting to be all I can take.

Posted by: kairikitty Tue Sep 28, 2004 @ 04:07am

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Commented on: Tue Sep 28, 2004 @ 04:10am


	[ Sounds sad. Hopelessness is such a dead feeling. ]

Commented on: Wed Sep 29, 2004 @ 05:25am


	that is a very interesting poem. i can tell it screams some kind of deep emotion, but can't quite put my finger on it. whoever wrote it, and i'm guessing it's you, must have had something really hurting them. and i don't think it's a love poem about a person, i think it could probubly have something to do with an idea or maybe a part of their inner self. i'll have to think about this more to get the whole idea 3nodding i'll be stalking your journal so don't worry about me loosing the link ninja

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