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Hollow A poem by Jacob M. In this world I feel only sorrow. A gloomy face with tears to follow. This body I have I shouldn't borrow, Not when my soul is empty and hollow. A message from the heart that is broken. . .

Posted by: Coldfront44 Sat Jan 24, 2009 @ 05:02am

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Commented on: Tue Jun 30, 2009 @ 06:36am

Commented on: Tue Jun 30, 2009 @ 06:39am


	When did Emoness equal beautiful?? lol

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Commented on: Wed Jul 01, 2009 @ 07:36am


	1.) Emo-ness isn't a word. 2.) It's very well written, though I'm not too fond of the third line.

Commented on: Wed Jul 01, 2009 @ 07:40am


	A lot of my words are not real cuz they be fantasmic!! >.<

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Commented on: Thu Jul 23, 2009 @ 01:31am

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