Hello, you are about to enter my journal, my head and some of my deepest thoughts, I hope your ready for this because I know I’m not, leave a comment if you dare, share with the class what you think and maybe I’ll get back to you. . .
Never Get Away. . .
Never let me pull you down Creeping into your heart No one can ever stop me You shall fall When I pull this knife across your throat
You pull away Never let you go Can’t pull away Violently killed By my hands You can not believe it Why will this happen to you
You are bleeding out Bleeding out forever more On to the floor
I don't quite know what I was thinking when I made this one ^-^ but I was listing to "Falling away from me" by Korn when I made it.
Ahh-RealSwagger Community Member
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Tue Feb 24, 2009 @ 11:45pm
*Gulps and touches hand to throat* O.O;!! Bell . . . Bella? P-please don't kill me. . . ? JKJK! I thought this poem was awesome, the brutal straightforward-ness of it literally sent a chill down my spine. I like the rhythm of it, as this is always something I look for in a poem - a good rhythm. This has it, I believe. Honestly, I think it is now one of my favorites of your work. 5/5 stars.
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Wed Feb 25, 2009 @ 12:46am
Wowzers! thank you Sweet V x2~! xDD I really like it myself but more importantly I'm happy you enjoyed it!