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Collectors pg. 11&12
Here is 2 more pages of my story, Sorry if it took too long. I wont be posting much more on for a while so sorry. sweatdrop

Pg. 11

I'm at Central Park. Someone is going to die in 15 minutes. I'm betting it's the old guy feeding the birds. I'm sitting on a bench, waiting for the gut feeling, "Death Radar" its called. Then it comes. A woman is jogging, and there's a tree, looks like its going to break. So I jog next to her, good thing I'm wearing Converse.
"Hi!" I greet her
"Hey." She says
" I love your shoes!" I compliment her as I touch her back and grab her soul.

Ka ching!! I got it! As I do my victory dance in my head, some guy takes the soul. Damn. I hear the tree go down and a scream as I run after the guy. I see him chage as he runs. Horns appear, a red tail comes out, wings bulge out of his shirt. He's a demon!! he turns around.

" Back off worthless!!" He screeches
" Give it back, Asswipe!" I shout
He starts to run off when a man yanks him by the shirt, takes my soul and punches him. The demon runs off. And I'm face to face with the hot guy with grey eyes. He smiles.

Pg. 12

" This is yours?" he asks
I shake my head yes. He gives me the soul back. I cant stop staring. He was beautiful.
" You okay?" he said, confused.
" Yeah. I should go." I blush
" I'm Gabe by the way." He introduces.
" Morgan." I say as I shake his hand
" So you are a collector?" I ask
" Yeah. Halfling Angel. You arent though?" He tells me, staring into my eyes
" Nope. Uh. I'm the first human collector. Died a couple days ago." I stammer as I stare at his glorious body.
" Oh. Want some help?" He offers
" Sure." I blush
So I follow Gabe as he collects. He helps me out, gives me tips and secrets of the trade. Super smart guy.
" how did you die?" he asks me
" Hit by a Dodge truck"
" I was killed by the plauge" he sighes
" The Black Plauge!?" I exclaim
" I know. I'm ancient." He laughes.
" Wow." I blush
" Hey Morgan Let's get some food." Gabe smiles.
I swear the boy is gonna make me faint one day, For sure.



Hope you like it blaugh

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    SPcle
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    Mon Apr 06, 2009 @ 05:40am


    awww =[ its ok if you dont post more i guess.. xP no sorries!!


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